I love that story. It would be so cool if you carried on, I woukd love it

This is awesome and i really want more if that is possible?

I love it! I can't wait for the next update

i think this is my favorite big hero 6 fanfic i've read :) thanks for writing it ! can't wait to read more !

Great chapter!

So wait, none of the nerds would've asked Hiro about his braces or his legs? Wouldn't Tadashi have mentioned it at some point?

~Drunk

If you want you could make Tadashi missing and presumed dead or stuck in the hospital. That would give Hiro the emotional state for the rest of the movie but ultimately leave Tadashi alive. I really enjoy the story so far and cannot wait to see where you take it.

Getting awesome good can't wait for more :)

Good beginning and interesting story but if you re going just like the movie just please don't kill tadashi maybe kidnaping hiro since he is handicaped without the brace so the "kabuki man" can control the microbots or kidnaping tadashi but i tkink kidnaping hiro is better because of his condition

Okey. I review.

Here is review.

It's reviewed.

Also, I think this is the first story I've read from you in a while. Like, a LONG while.

Hmm.

Okay, I'm done.

~Drunk

Great story!

Getting super good can't wait for more

Well, IDK how it actually works with getting arrested, but I can tell you this.

Hiro could waterproof his electronics quite simple with some Corrosion X. It's not perfect, fool proof, or permanent, but it'd get the job done enough for splashes and stuff.

It's also mighty handy when building/upgrading hobby grade RC stuff.

~Drunk

It looks pretty intresting :)
A couple notes:
It's not made very clear that there's anything wrong with his legs or what he's doing with the robot. I'm not exactly sure if he uses the controller for the robot or the legs or both. You oughta make things a little clearer. Maybe in the future try making a bulletpoint list of events and then write them with descriptions and such.
The other thing- length. It's a very short read. Doing what I said above would lengthen it, but also adding more descriptions. Add more flair and emotion to the existing descriptions and more descriptions in total.
That kinda leads me to my next and final thing. It's a very flat read. You didn't really set any kind of mood and so instead of me being invested in the story I just saw a vauge confusing fight. You need to make the reader /feel/ what happens. This happens, of course, with descriptions, and sensory words. Remember this too, don't /tell/ us what emotion to feel. Don't do something like, "Hiro nerviously shifted around." Show us the emotion with the characters actions.
That's all! It's a very intresting concept, and I'm eager to read more!

Hey, if his legs are souped up, he could just KICK his attackers across the alley.

Boom.

:3

~Drunk