| Reviews for To Conquer |
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   ShannTheMann256 chapter 9 . 7/14 please update soon 10/10 |
| Scarlet Dewdrops chapter 9 . 7/13 Did a reread today, so fun! |
| jamesduen chapter 9 . 6/20 ugg, accidentally hit the post button. Anyway. While the story is heading in a good direction, I feel like you're constantly struggling with the perspective portion of the writing. That Harry is getting lost to the other personalities. It's understandable that he might have at first, but his mother's protective magic should've also provided the protection from their personality influences. Yes her protection is used up at this point, and yes the memories alone can influence Harry, but the written chapters so far suggest he's possessed. I would love to see and update, but as is I can imagine things happening mostly cannon. Thanks for sharing your story! |
| jamesduen chapter 9 . 6/20 What an interesting idea for a story. I can't help but feel this story is abandoned at this point and I don't blame you either |
| Sam chapter 9 . 2/26 Please update this story it is wonderful and I need more |
| Drkfury chapter 9 . 10/10/2019 More updates please |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/1/2019 Please continue! Can he take Luna (she's the only female I like) with him? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/1/2019 Every magical ruler needs their own house-elf army... For books 1-3 maybe not summerize it but change it to fit 'them'? Ravenclaw or Slytherin or just 2 be funny Hufflepuff bc an Intergalactic Ruler would love loyal and hard working followers. The Hat might also see that change is needed soon or they'll breed themselves into extinction or be discovered 1st bc of their own stupidity. No continual pettiness from other students, bc 'they' wouldn't put up with it... Maybe challenge all his stalkers to duals or something? Restraining orders? Flying ok but we really not need the Remember all, Midnight Dual, Fluffy, Troll, or Forest incident. He could get rid of the Dragon, Quillmort, and Stone a different way. Maybe find away for the Dark Marks to issue and enforce orders without him having to physically be there/tell him... Especially with getting them to vote and act the way he wants them 2. Milk the Basilisks Vemon, collect it's shedded Skin and any lose teeth, hunt some of those spiders for their Vemon, Silk, and other parts and sell them 'slowly' onto the market (keep some for himself and his empire 2) so the sell prices won't lower. While he's hunting he could probably find other goodies in the forest 2. Potion ingredients, lose Unicorn, Hippogriff, Centaur, and ECT hairs/feathers... That other Wizards would over look bc that would be to easy. |
| Dreous44 chapter 9 . 9/29/2019 Great story so far. |
| Michaenovak chapter 9 . 9/8/2019 skvělý |
| Lord-Chrono chapter 9 . 8/1/2019 Please continue! |
| King of the Sea chapter 9 . 6/16/2019 This is great ! I love HP SG . Especially where Harry builds himself up to the stars! Please update |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/30/2019 Damn, this is really good. Please do update! :D |
| Aire5 chapter 3 . 5/27/2019 nice fic so far |
| cellester chapter 9 . 5/16/2019 Love the story! hope you update soon. |
