that was good keep the chapters coming

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this is awesome. pls update and try not to rush it yeah?

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I'd love to see Naruto paired with Ryuzetsu or Tenten.

Why not do all three in a harem, if you don't ship Fu at least have them form a sibling relationship.

This is pretty interesting, from the prayer bead weight training to the jutsu library. Those elemental jutsu peaked my curiosity especially. The raiton, can the walls move or are they stationary? The futon, is the wind chakra like the blades of the flying swallow? The suiton, how dense can they be made and can the ph level be changed? The doton, could any pre-existing earthen material be manipulated? The katon, could the fire be used from any limb or the entire body?
That pairing man. I'd go with Ryūzetsu or Fū. Leaning more towards Ryūzetsu though. Why? The skill she displayed was amazing. Especially that shape manipulation of her fire along with the color change.

I like it so far the way you write is amazing, everything just seems to flow right. Can't wait for the update.

I like your idea here! seems like an interesting premise!

I've read your list of peeves. Number Nineteen: Naruto learning 'nothing' during the time-skip stood out for me with regards to this story. So I wanted to tell you some things that may seem offensive to you.

To me, it's not that Naruto got stronger after the timeskip because he was. It's the fact that Naruto could've been so much better than he was when he first returned to the Leaf Village. Jiraiya was a Sannin for crying out loud! He could've taught Naruto a buttload more in the past three years in the Narutoverse!

I hope you make it a Naruto and Ryuzetsu pairing. Ryuzetsu is the only one out of those three girls that would sacrifice herself to save Naruto, most underrated Naruto character ever.

Can you do Naruto x Ryuzetsu? we don't get enough of these.

Naruto Ryuzetsu all the way.

wait. where's chapter two?
interesting story.. and i am listening or reading, WTF.

Three rare choices neat. Good start I'd say.