Sad story

...welp...it was fun while it lasted...not a fan of the ending personally. Still it’s your work so whatever.

When's the smug coming?

What a great read! I've been waiting each installment of your work and I can't wait for the next chapter. It's very well written with only minor mistakes. Hope you update soon xx

I think it is best if you have someone to check spellings for you. There are some mistakes here and there, but they are minor. The plot is really captivating and I really look forward to what happens next. You created different entities in the story. Your characterization may be far from Canon but that just add to the poignancy of the story. Keep up the good work!

Wow how did I miss this? I really like the storyline & the chapters arent short! Best of all, its my otp Amebel :3 keep up the good work, and i can't wait for the next update (btw i like the smut ehehehe /_/)

I actually like the plot because of the huge potential it has. There is rarely any grammar mistakes and the word play is decent Congratulations on posting your story and sharing your talent!

The story has a lot of potential. Please do continue.