he was jealous even if he dont want admit to himself xD

Ahhhh this is such a perfect glimpse into Naoki's head, I love it!

Haha goodness, you really did not like him in the first season did you? I hope you thought he'd grown by season two.

I like the way you wrote about Kotoko, and how he's starting to see her in a different light at this point.

Thank you for writing. I rather hope you end up writing more. I just finished the series myself and am not ready to let it go just yet.

Oh dang, that was good. Well done!

This is a great description of their first kiss and of how much of a jerk Naoki is! Even though he IS a jerk, he is a jealous, scared and confused one. He doesn't even know what he is confused about, but his instincts may guide him when his brain is lost. The result of all of that is that kiss!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

This was really well written. It kept Naoki in character, but still managed to show a wide and intense array of emotions.

Again, you have nailed naoki's POV ! Iam so impressed and happy with this one as well, it was well written with very accurate descriptions and feelings that the scenes had ! Well in my opinion that is... i get so excited everytime i see you post a story! And read it at least twice, thanks alot for sharing your work! Im sure the real author of the manga wouldve been proud as well

I really hate naoki

I love your fanfics so much! the way you portray Naoki Its absolutely perfect! Please continue!