I AM REALLY ENJOYING THIS FANFIC. I really hope you continue and it's good to know you got your own laptop to use now. Also I found this story like two days ago. I swear Adam is a friggin savage when he said weiss should take him to the dance and weiss was like really? And then Adam just shut her down. Goddamit Adam you friggin savage. Keep up the great work alright! I look forward to the next update.

I love black roses i hope you keep writing it

oh dear... also LOL Ruby decked Cinder In the face XD gods that was cathartic to read! don't ever listen to the Haters this is a bloody epic story I can't wait for more. _

I love the interactions between Ruby and black.

notvisulebliss

It was stated he was nerfed to the point he can damage mountains like saitama would be able to so basically a weaker goku when he started out as a adult

Umm I don't want to start comparing shows but remnant would not be able to handle someone like Black... In fact I'm pretty sure piccolo would stomp that world without effort not even needing to take his weights off... Sooooo with that being said are you going to nerf BGoku so RWBY characters can actually be able to step to him?

Cringe, Gay and dumb. Only idiots and rwby fans would like it. Even then the latter is a stretch. Zamasu would never let this fodder salem do anything to him. Even if he was weakened quadrillions of times over, he still would have enough power to clap multi galaxy fighters.
Zamasu is so ooc in this it's not even funny. It's like some edgey teenager in Goku's body.
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Awesome so romantic.. I really love it. I wanted to see black and ruby first kiss..

I love how every update brings a round of people who are salty this isn't just a power fantasy. How they missed the obvious romance implications from the summary is beyond me. The funniest part is where they barely get a handful of chapters in and act like they they were long time fans that dropped it. Don't listen to them, if they couldn't even get halfway through the story and their only criticism is that this isn't a one-sided massacre then they're just salty it's not a power fantasy.

There are legitimate criticisms but "not edgy enough" and "not a one sidedstomp" are not among them.

Thank you for fixing the horrendous grammar and spelling issues from the last time I read your work. That really bugged the hell out of me. I hope that you will find enough time to update soon but I won't hold my breath on that. I'm just hoping we can get back to the main plot progression though as the slice of life is becoming a bit too overpowering.

What will Adam and Raven do about the visions? What is with that etched door? What happened to Salem's master and why has black basically been reduced to waiting for Roman to actually perform a heist? When will we see Black actually cut loose?

Find out all of this and more in the next volume in the next year on B - R - Z!

Don’t listen to the grouchy people! This is my favourite story on fanfiction! I’ve been waiting for the dance scene and I was not disappointed, I’m excited to too what happens between Black and Cinder! I always get super excited when I see an update and I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

sorry, but I don’t want to see the divine Black being bossed around by a weakling mortal who even Krillin can clean the floor with, it’s really unbelievable and deceptive, I was super excited to read this story, but I ended up stressing, so I will stop here, if at some future time in the story Black recover all his power then spoil me and I will be super happy and the hype will return, and one more thing, when Salem activated the necklace I expected a different reaction from Black, like endure the pain and laugh sadistically '' the pain will only make me stronger '' I don't even think this character is Black anymore

bro you really need a beta

NEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDD MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEEE NOWWWWWWWWW!

Did you guys are stupid? if the character just too op or over power And where is the Fun of story? And if you want black to over power just wait until he got his rose form and shut all you mouth Okaaayyy?

such a beautiful story don't listen to the flames they are just being mean for the sake of it and who have nothing better to do than say bad things about this I love it a lot its amazing especially the pairing