I enjoyed this very much, you kept the essence of each characters and developed them very naturally. Even with Moka calling Tsukune "lover" is very believeable, I could actually picture her saying and doing all this stuff after becoming his girlfriend. All in all great story!

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Where's the next chapter?

If moka really cared about tsukune and love him for who he is, she would stop him from dealing a Killing blow

Hope to see more soon

This sounds really good. Please continue. Moka and Tsukune forever.

Please finish the phenomenal Spider-Man love lust story

I'm kinda liking this and kinda not. The story is interesting but there is 3 things that will make Tsukune kill without mercy. 1 seriously harm or kill a member of his family, 2 seriously harm or kill Moka, 3 seriously harm or kill one of his closest friends. To do anything else makes him a bit unbelievable as a character. 2nd Moka wouldn't have stopped him, if anything she would have helped him finish the bad guy off. After all Moka loved Tsukune's parents. Ok enough rambling on what I didn't like about this. What I did like was the overall flow of the storytelling, the building of a new world threatening danger being spun into plot that will keep readers interested. Over all I find this rather enjoyable and look forward to reading more.

Pretty decent so far. Keep up the good work.

Nice work so far.

make more please

This is a bit early to give an honest opinion of the plot but I look forward to future chapters

where the next one

Quite interesting!
Will be waiting for the next update

Loving this so far. Keep up the great work!