I really would love to see you continue this story! I didn’t know I would like it so much when I stated reading. You have me invested in those characters lol.

I didn’t expect to get so caught up with this fic. Good stuff. I’m a sucker for unrequited love stories and this is written well. I appreciate the slow build. I hope you are able to continue at some point

Jesus Hinata has never strived to be perfect arguably her most memorable moment is her telling Naruto you might fail but you still strive “you’re a proud failure” the fact that your 25 year old version of her has less emotional maturity than her 12 year old self in canon is embarrassing

Inspiration-crush-love-mutual love-marriage

Nowhere in that timeline has she ever strived to be perfect for him in fact he was the one that showed her perfection isn’t needed as long as you strive to be your best to try your best

Honestly I always use this comparison but Hinata wankers write her more like Sakura then herself and I don’t really get why Sakura is the worst written character in the entire series she’s barely a character her entire reason for existing in the larger narrative revolves around “sasuke kun”

Hinata has never been that so I didn’t get why people write her as that it makes her character infinitely worse

I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was good to know more about Naruto's work. I wonder what will happens when he sees Hinata again? looking forward to next chapter!

Thanks for the update. Its good to see Naruto going to office again! I am desperately waiting for some NaruHina interaction in this story lol

... you're having fun toying with us aren't you? Honestly I'm glad we get to see Naruto in his office. I almost forgot that he manages a charity service for a living (it's not like he was on his aor something). I know that you probably won't take it this way but I could definitely see Naruto realizing an "It's A Wonderful Life" lesson. (He has a lot of people who love him, he just doesn't realize it yet). Try as you might, but I'm just going to keep finding a positive spin to this. Thank you for continuing this.

Uzumaki spiral - If you've been in love and proposed this is how it happens. Some times you'll go years still wanting to call them. I've been there before. It's far from pathetic.

How long has it been since the breakup because to me it looks a bit pathetic to still try and call Hinata? (this is for the story not you as an author)

Not bad waited a long time for this

love your story, update soon!

Tried to review 3 times now, not sure why it's not coming through..

Anyway, your Hinata shouldn't be anywhere near Naruto. Until she pulls her head out of her ass (maybe even get some professional help) she's just a dead weight to anyone. I'm very happy Neji called her out, and I really liked Neji's and Tenten personalities.

I hope Naruto and Hinata will meet on one of his fundraisers, where he's with Shion or someone else, and she realizes that she's made a mistake and starts to better herself before attempting to get him back.

Hope to see more soon!

Your Hinata reslly doesn't deserve Naruto. She's acting out because she isn't doing shit on her own, while Naruto is working towards his ( and he thought, their) dream. Stringing someone on for a month while you know you don't care about them anymore is horrible. Blaming him for making the best out of it is even worse. I really hope she gets her act together, because Neji's right by calling her out, she's just as bad as the rest of her family.

Loved your Neji and Tenten though!

I hope Naruto gets a big fundraiser together, which he attends with Shion or someone else who cares for him, with Hinata attending for BCCTV. Might show how she's let slip the best thing that ever happened to her.

Contrary to the negative review, I do hope they grow and get back together, but at the moment I'm just very frustrated with Hinata doing literally nothing. Great story overall, the best ones are the ones thst make you feel something, even though they're not always happy.

How many chapters are you planning this story to be? Hope to see you update again soon!

Great job portraiting Neji and Tenten. Loved how Neji called Hinata out on her closemindedness. This Hinata doesn't even deserve to be in the same country as Naruto as she is right now.

I'm looking forward for them to meet each other again when Naruto's having a high-end fundraising event (him as host) and he'll be successful. He really deserves that. I'm a NaruHina fan, but this current Hinata really needs to get her shit together before she's getting any browny points.

Can't wait for more! Can you give an estimate how many chapters you'll think this story'll be?

She is going to see she made a huge mistake
I would like to see Naruto inherit a namikaze company seeing he is the sole heir and he turns it around hurting gr hyuga very badly

it's odd I both hate and like your story I went to the both follow at the same time I want to ignore it I have absolutely no idea what I should do I think I'm going to just ignore it for now and casually read it whenever I see it in the chapter list