Reviews for Depths of Brotherhood
onepieceofnarutoandbleach chapter 11 . 3/5/2019
Don't get the hype of this, I don't understand why rape is so necessary to authors. It's almost glorified in all the stories I see it used in. Unnecessary and ridiculous.
Ian-the-Existential-Crisis chapter 14 . 1/11/2018
I don't think there are enough words in my vocabulary to describe how amazing this and all of your stories are. I think I might be addicted to your writing.
NicoleBL chapter 14 . 7/19/2017
What a beautiful ending, the last of Prompto's words had so much more meaning to them, he had said that out of actual experience, his barcode and the affect it always had on him throughout all his life. Happy that Ignis knew about it finally, Prompto shouldn't even be worried about the other two knowing, of course they wouldn't think of him any different either, but Prom could never understand that until it actually happens.
Anyways, man I never wanted to finish this, I've been literally addicted to it the past few days, it even affected my sleeping habits since everytime it's 'Just one more chap' until I found myself passing my usual bedtime by hours haha. It had so much more feelings and emotions than the other fics you've done, it's just so special! Well done with this masterpiece really, you're truthfully talented.
NicoleBL chapter 12 . 7/18/2017
Made my eyes tearing up and a couple if tears fell, do u know how amazing that felt? To be moved so much from something u read, just.. Wow. Missed being this emotional in a while. That last scene will probably linger in my head for a while, Prompto's breaking voice still in my head. There was just one wish, that Noctis had heard that as well, hoped he did. It surely hurt, but in a good way u know? Absolutely beautiful what u have done there. Thank u so much! Ur chapters are making my days :"D
NicoleBL chapter 7 . 7/18/2017
Oh. My. God. Wow wow wow what a fantastic chapter! Gods it's so good I felt the need to specially review on it. Wow, the mess Prompto is getting into, how he had killed Impius just so suddenly and with axe, scary to br honest but whatbit would be like for him? Of course he'd lose his mind, the poor boy :( Although it was to save Ignis, and ge probably acted without realizing. The scene was just so amazing I kept reading over and over, and throughout my shook at the events, the way ge cried and how he had become almost hysterical. Just wow, honestly I think this was the best chapter you've ever written (so far at least) so intense and angsty in the ways i truly love. Although, I still can't wait to see when Noct and Gladio will arrive alreay! Cmon guys where are u.
Let's see what happens next
MatterTathered chapter 14 . 4/4/2017
As I now come to the coda of this wonderful piece, I must praise you on your realism, character development, in character development, and plot 3 This was a rather golden piece to read, and I loved every second of it, down to the timidness of Prompto's actions and Ignis' confidence to the broken little sun and the furious yet concerned adviser 3 I deeply praise Noctis' and Gladio's characterization as well; however, I feel as though this was more of a story about Ignis and Prompto's bond out of anything 3 Seeing the display of pain these two went through and how they stuck together throughout it all was a breath of fresh air, along with the dusting of strawberry powder that was produced by Noctis' and Gladio's rage. And most of all, I love the fact that you didn't just up and brush off the fact that Prompto got raped. I have read quite a few stories where my favorite character, sadly, gets raped, but no matter how many stories I read, it seems like in all of them the character will just brush it off to the side after a few chapters because of odd writing or macho-ness. However, yours was more of a realistic side, and I thank you for taking that into consideration!

Here we had Prompto struggling with his memories and being prone to constant nightmares of what happened; even being scared to be touched by Gladio...! This whole self-contradiction and misfortune lasted until right to the end, giving hope that he could get through it with friends, yet not completely ridding himself of it either, which is VERY realistic. Even to the end, his now-revealed secret ties to another pain which involves him being an MT. So, my dear, you have fulfilled my strict expectations to a T! And in the future, I can't wait to read more-be it your earlier works or your future ones! And I hope that you gain even more inspiration considering that Prompto's story is now on the horizon 3 Thank you once more for bestowing us your wonderful writing 3
MatterTathered chapter 12 . 4/4/2017
This had me on the verge of tears I tell you! It was one thing to know that it was implied, but to read Prompto actually breaking from it-it just breaks my heart! And kudos because not a lot of stories can do that! :c
MatterTathered chapter 11 . 4/4/2017
Another amazing chapter 3 It's funny, I usually have the attention span of a small penut, but with your stories, I find myself reading every little word unlike with most stories on how I skim a tad bit when it gets too panned out from the dramatic parts. So kudos to you for keeping an attention span like mine in your clutch! And sorry if this isn't a very detailed review, but I'm saving that to the end :3 But again, wonderful chapter!
MatterTathered chapter 9 . 4/4/2017
Dude I hope Noct, Gladio, and Iggy wreck that fucker's face in! The laughing bastard! Goddamn it, how the hell do you make me hate a fictional character so much! DX!
MatterTathered chapter 7 . 4/4/2017
MY POOR HONEY CAKE! HE'S TOO DAMN PRECIOUS FOR THIS WORLD! TT-TT i really REALLY love how you display his character! First he starts up giddy and happy then down to nervousness and then to breaking and fear-all the while dipping down enough for him to even nearly kill a man! Now that's amazing character development for a bubbly character! Then again, I expected no less from you 3
MatterTathered chapter 5 . 4/4/2017
Godddaaamnit! I knew Prompto was going to get raped! You have a habit of letting horrible things happen to him! Yet I love it at the same time DX! Usually Iggy is rather composed, so seeing him get pissed really made my eyes go wide 3 Gotta loved a pissed off Iggy! But yet...I feel so bad for my sweet little sunshine TT-TT
MatterTathered chapter 3 . 4/3/2017
So apparently Iggy noticed the barcode and just didn't say anything? Or he really is blind as shit! I can't tell, but I can't help but be more interested as time goes on / Also, wonderful chapter once again! Everything was extremely well written and everyone is very much so in character! I just love Prompto's sweet and nervousness TT-TT He's truly a gift from God TT-TT
MatterTathered chapter 2 . 4/3/2017
It's so impossibly sad at how cute you make Prompto here TT-TT He's such an adorable little seed of sunshine and yet this jackass is literally putting a foot on his happiness TT-TT I shall continue reading because you do nothing but intrigue me! 3
ellaygee chapter 14 . 3/29/2017
maaaan I've been waiting for daaays for this to update and somehow missed that it did. good story!
Mirai Lianna chapter 14 . 3/22/2017
:) I think the best part about this story is that even though I knew they'd be safe in the end, I was still soooo nervous and worried for them! I really love your work! I hope to see more from you!
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