Hi! This is a really nice story. Keep on writing, I'll definitely read them. Small tip; something that my readers have told me, is to shorten your paragraphs slightly. You've got the rest down Pat. Waiting for the next chapter!

wow looks like you've did a very great job on this spicy and sweet amourshipping fanfic dude. i hope we all get to see serena and ash get married together in the future as husband and wife in the pokemon series and beyond. we all will remain amourshippers and we all will keep on supporting amourshipping for all time. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.