This is amazing! You are such an incredible writer! Your style is simply stunning and I adore your portrayal of these characters. I am so excited to read your other stories~

I LOVED this story! It made me feel fuzzy all over!

That was awesome. I loved it. Thank you for sharing. I love your fics. I'm happy that you love writing outside perspectives because it makes your fics unique and I love the twist on it. I'm so happy that you've already posted the next installment of this series type thing, I can't wait to read!

SO CUTE! I love the additional chapter. However, if this was suppose to be an ending, then it did the opposite. This feels more like a set-up for more chapters. Whether or not that happens is completely up to you, but it seems that way with both Batman and Artemis gunning for this mugger.

I need the rest of this series so badly. I love love love how you write them

From how stunned Wally was about hearing Dick was bullied… Seems like Artemis won't be the only overprotective sibling Dick is going to have protecting him while not Robin… There's still a possible chance that Artemis will figure out Dick Grayson is Robin.

…You'd think, after all those years had passed since the argument, Dick would've regretted saying those words when he started viewing Bruce as his dad… In terms of speaking, Bruce is merely continuing John's duty as a parent, not exactly trying to replace him in the least… Maybe, if Dick does regret telling Bruce he didn't want him to be his father and told Bruce how he feels, then perhaps Bruce can make it official on adopting him (obviously, not change his last name, but making him a part of his family instead of just a ward until he becomes of age to be on his own).

Very good

This is a sweet story. It's interesting to look at Bruce and Dick's relationship from an outside perspective. I like the policeman's thoughts and how they changed when Clark showed up. It makes sense that Bruce would be stoic, trying to hold himself together, but that he would be more willing to show his feelings to Clark. I also like Bruce's interaction with Artemis at the end. I think that at this point he'd be glad that Artemis is friends with Dick, not just Robin.

oooh Clark would be the one to gain a reaction from Bruce, loved the extra people's views in this. Very dramatically and perfectly done XDD

Aaaahhhhhh, so good, so sad! Now I have to go read the rest!

Beautiful! :,)

I love the way you write Artemis

Very emotional. I hope Wally comes to visit too, seeing as he knows Dick is Robin AND how shaken Artemis was. I'm sure he'd want to tell him.

I felt like it ended on a very open note which could have been closed a bit but either than that it's good. However, in the show, Artemis hides the fact she lives in gotham and pretends she lives in Star City so she wouldn't openly admit Dick tutors her

That was terrifying but sweet. I love that Clark helped Bruce break down and release some of his emotion