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Not bad.

Super cute! Great job with the Turtle scenes.

That was cute, and your 12 year old can write, prob gets it from her mama

This was great, especially the turtle scenes. The apple must not have fallen far from the tree. I think you 2 should collaborate on a series of these. Maybe they could be Smurfs next or something:)

Tell your 12-year-old that the dialogues were very funny and well written, she is a talented little writer! all the best,
M.

Hellooo, Kels and Kels Jr.! I have to say that I didn't really know what to expect of a crossover fic of that type when I clicked the link. But I was positively surprised because you combined these seemingly very different shows/fictional worlds perfectly. To merge this in the form of a dream was super clever and it was a funny and very sweet story. And heads off to the little writer-to-be; that was a great read and I'm not sure whether I would have been able to tell the difference if it hadn't been for the A/N. Lovely! :-)

Aw this was great. An awesome joint effort! I'm the era of loving the original turtles as a kid- back then it was mikey everyone loved - so I understood it all and enjoyed reminiscing. Loved you got the pizza link between the two fandoms as that's what popped into my head before I started reading. Great girl afternoon!

What a nice idea. :) I don't know much about the turtles but this dream worked out really well. And it was great how the whole gang got a role in Chandler's dream. Please tell your daughter that she did an amazing job and that she's really talented. I really see this as a dream Chandler could have with all these details and his confusion. Thank you for taking the time to write this. :)

Loved this! It was really fun - your 12 year old writes really well, I'm impressed!

Cute!:) Your daughter should write more stories she's a good writer!

Tho what happens to their miracle daughter from your story "All That Is Bright?"

This is so cute! Thanks!