Reviews for If Only
milk chapter 4 . 8/24/2019
this story kis great
milk chapter 12 . 8/22/2019
love it
Guest chapter 9 . 3/7/2018
Yo yo yo
Guest chapter 10 . 6/12/2017
Just a little grammar reminder, it's best to not use capital letters when stressing the words. Capital letters aren't formal. So, instead of using capital letters to stress, use italics or underlining instead. You still shouldn't use it even if your character is screaming. Use exclamation marks, and _ said instead.
lojosmom chapter 17 . 5/12/2017
Great story. I will definitely read the sequel.
lojosmom chapter 9 . 5/12/2017
Don't listen to the critics. I am enjoying your story. I am glad I found it.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2017
Perfect end to a perfect story, great job! Can't wait for possibilities
kirsty21 chapter 15 . 4/26/2017
cool update soon thanks
azphxbrd chapter 15 . 4/25/2017
Good Story so far, awaiting next update.
You Only Live Once-Cherish It chapter 15 . 4/23/2017
brilliant chapter as always Indi xxx
SiriusBlack394 chapter 15 . 4/23/2017
Wonderful story! I love it!
Guest chapter 15 . 4/22/2017
Since the title is if only, the final chapter is going to be Harry's birthday, where it follows canon and all of this might be just a wistful dream.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/19/2017
Okay, I REALLY love this, at first I thought that it wasn't really my type of story, but I kept reading and it got really good! I absolutely love it and can't wait for the next instalment
PopcornWolf10 chapter 14 . 4/15/2017
Awww I loved the Harry and Minerva moment! It made my heart melt on impact. Can't wait for more, keep it up! :D (P.S You put Bill twice when stating the Weasley childrens ages.)
MarauderInside chapter 13 . 4/11/2017
please continue i love it!
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