ohhhhh my heart my heart its bursting oh mah gaaaddd its too adorable thats it i rest my case
i am dead i can finally rest in peace with this hahahahaa

D'aww cute one! :3 Tsundere Ace I see HAHAHAHA and Sabo's so sly~!

Soo cute !

damn you author ! why you make me like this ! ahhhh those adorable ASL i loveeee it !

Acelubo is all i want and need in life to be honest... air? waiter? food? no! just acelubo

Dear author,
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY SELF CONTROL? You had me squealing, snickering, laughing and squealing even more, IN FRONT OF MY COWORKERS. Now they think I'm crazy and I can't explain it's because I just saw the cutest, sweetest, munchkiniest fanfiction ever. You're a meanie! A meanie who is even meanier than Ace! And I absolutely love you for it. 3 Thank you very much for this piece of heaven! It was beautifully written and I'm still blushing and squealing at all the adorableness. Toot-toot!

Holy shit Rainy this is so good. I love everything about this and more! Seriously I don't know how you do it every time~ Such a nice flow and great characterization! You're amazing!
I love how Sabo left them alone for a half hour and everything just went to shit it's hilarious and so true. Ace Luffy Flailing Chaos but Ace Luffy Sabo Still Chaos but they are more balanced when it comes to feelings and fighting lol. And poor Lu must of been frustrated by his own outburst. Usually that sort of thing just goes in one ear and out the other. He must be feeling pretty frustrated at his lack of improvement in comparison to Ace and Sabo. He just wants to catch up with them. And Ace flipping out, not able to handle emotional Lu is the best. I can just see him holding out crying Lu to sabo, demanding he fix him. So adorable
And I love how you ended it with Sabo just radiating happiness and satisfaction. They're all so content and happy and I adore this fluff so much.
You're fabulous, never change!

aww that was honestly adorable! good job on this

Aww, these adorkable boys...

THIS WAS GLORIOUS! I adored the heck out of it, thanks for writing! And the funny thing was, was that at first I hadn't realized that it was it YOU that wrote this, but I slowly recognized your writing style and thought, 'oh, no way.' But then I checked, and there was your name! Haha. I thought that was cool/funny. XD

This is cotton candy grade fluff and I was laughing at Ace's predictability and Sabo's sneakiness
Keep on the writes

this is just so cute, im smiling like an idiot. I really love these brothers, and this story. 3

Awwww this was so adorable 3 I love asl and now I'm going to have a goofy smile on my face when I think of them all day cuz of this. Sabo is like fix it Felix and ace is wreck it Ralph. Meanwhile Luffy is a wall.

So cute to the EXTREME! Oh, Lu one does not simply make you cry besides Ace. I love it!

So cute! Ace's reaction was entertaining as well. Keep up the good work!