Reviews for Near Miss 109 |
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DevinBourdain chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 delightful Face whump. I hope you continue to supply this fandom with more. |
avieryfriend chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 Well I loved it, first of all it has my favorite character getting a fair amount of 'shameless torture' as you put it and I appreciate that you wrote Face as a strong character and not a wimpy, whiney victim . Your writing is good and I look forward to reading more of your stories. |
Frapper chapter 1 . 11/27/2017 With that description: "shameless Face torture", I had to read this, and you delivered on that promise! Nicely done, not too gory, not too OTT, and realistic. I loved reading it, thanks. |
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 We do like to hurt our Face |
BMSH chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 Again - really like the story - nothing like a little Face hurt/comfort! There were a couple misspellings - but not glaring. The only thing glaring to me was "Federale" - unless you were trying to do it phonetically. Glad I found your stories - I will continue reading. |
Haro kzoids chapter 1 . 4/26/2017 Otra historia que podría apuntar como favorita. No es que me agrade que sea torturado... no mucho al menos. La preocupación de padre a hijo es lo que me encantó. |
Alikia chapter 1 . 4/4/2017 I liked it. Short, sweet and well done. I'm actually hoping for more |
x Bout as Stable as the Wind x chapter 1 . 3/15/2017 YAAAAAAAAAAS :D Amazing story! Perfect characterization, clean and engaging writing style |
Kim Borowiak chapter 1 . 3/11/2017 A great bit of Face torture. I love the line "I'm fine" even as his is hanging from chains and his conversations with the team about him and Mexico. great story. |
Elise Deschat chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 typical Face...always in trouble, and this time without a lady involved... |
Var Devonshire chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 Poor face. Nice interaction at the end there. Well done! |