Reviews for Near Miss 109
DevinBourdain chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
delightful Face whump. I hope you continue to supply this fandom with more.
avieryfriend chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
Well I loved it, first of all it has my favorite character getting a fair amount of 'shameless torture' as you put it and I appreciate that you wrote Face as a strong character and not a wimpy, whiney victim . Your writing is good and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Frapper chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
With that description: "shameless Face torture", I had to read this, and you delivered on that promise!
Nicely done, not too gory, not too OTT, and realistic.
I loved reading it, thanks.
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 7/13/2017
We do like to hurt our Face
BMSH chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Again - really like the story - nothing like a little Face hurt/comfort! There were a couple misspellings - but not glaring. The only thing glaring to me was "Federale" - unless you were trying to do it phonetically. Glad I found your stories - I will continue reading.
Haro kzoids chapter 1 . 4/26/2017
Otra historia que podría apuntar como favorita.
No es que me agrade que sea torturado... no mucho al menos.
La preocupación de padre a hijo es lo que me encantó.
Alikia chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
I liked it. Short, sweet and well done. I'm actually hoping for more
x Bout as Stable as the Wind x chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
YAAAAAAAAAAS :D Amazing story! Perfect characterization, clean and engaging writing style
Kim Borowiak chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
A great bit of Face torture. I love the line "I'm fine" even as his is hanging from chains and his conversations with the team about him and Mexico. great story.
Elise Deschat chapter 1 . 3/9/2017
typical Face...always in trouble, and this time without a lady involved...
Var Devonshire chapter 1 . 3/9/2017
Poor face. Nice interaction at the end there. Well done!