So I thought about this story some more and I feel like there were mistakes in it. It's either that or I'm an idiot. To me it seems like Zoey was supposed to be the gunned down in chapter 47. I also feel like it doesnt make sense why the flygon would shoot Cassidy. Also Cassidy shouldn't be able to talk and run after that if she's alive after that. Please don't kill her off though. I feel like Raiden would have gotten there earlier. BTW I would have put is review in chapter 49 but I already put a review there.

Wow. Just wow. This entire story was amazing. I don't remember seeing Zoey in the chapter where Cassidy got shot though. When did she Get there? Its probably explained but I suck at reading. Also how can Cassidy still talk and walk after getting shot? Anyway this story awesome.

Hello there! I'm taking a short break from writing my own story, So I thought I'd read something for inspiration, Happened upon this series. Gotta tell ya, this was the first fanfic series in a LONG time to suck me in, basically read That Glaceon and up to now in the span of about a week. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here! Hope you're doing well, have a good one. -SC22

Even after 16 whole years, Abby is still attached to Julley

I found a mistake in this chapter: Anais :)

LuanOTP
"To start things off, i really liked how you pulled off abby's narration in the first half of the chap it felt so real, almost like it was written by abby herself, one could even say, this chapter really makes you feel like abby".
8.8/10 "To much rain"
-Hot "WaterBag" Ramen

"Lmao, all of the references you put in this serious chapter without actually removing the serious part was so slick, and i really liked that you turned a mere comic into an item that changed everything, like seriously, its true"
9.5/10 "Ah masta piece"
-Axel M. Rosa

"When is the raibone and analsis is gonna do sexxing"
6.9/100 "no lemons, no like"
-TheHentaiProtagoRamen

Congrats on 500 reviews!

Well I think this chapter was great! It was slow starting but picked up the pace quickly. Even then, it still felt quite short and I want more! As you can see, it also made me want to know what's next, which is a good thing after we seemingly wrapped up this little bit of the story.

"Angel-eve" thanks for referencing me lmao

what the fuck

this review Includes Spoiler. please do not read if you have not read chapter 47
( i had to review on chapter 46 because i already left a review on 47)

I found a really big error you made in this chapter. You might want to fix this.

i might be mistaken, but you make it seem like Cassidy was shot and possibly killed in this chapter. I can tell this was a mistake. Cassidy was never meant to die. Cassidy will live. if i am correct, what you were attempting to convey was that Julley gets a quad feed by killing Gauvin and his 3 goons (which also forgot to be mentioned.) saves Anais and Cassidy, becomes a local hero for his efforts, and then at the end, there is another Julley and Cassidy lemon.

please fix this author's mistake as soon as possible. it will make the story more clear.

Ps: the 1 max review per chapter is a kinda dumb mechanic.

At least I can review.

Welp, I just re-read the April Fools chapter again, and dang, it's even funnier with context.

I like the current conversation we are having about reviews. so I am making a review. I hope you like it.

...i pulled a typical Kariff move...pressed “post review” by accident.
3. Wasn’t Raidon already en route to the pier and hour before Cassidy? why did she get there before him?
4. If only Cassidy was able to listen and sit still, smh
5. Gauvin is now up there next to other characters i despise.