Great story, right to the point. Love it!

Awe love the caring side of Jack.

This was wonderful! I love how you write Mac and Jack, it just seems like you have such a great grasp on their characters, like how Mac had a little bit of a panic attack before the party but ended up actually enjoying himself. How he was surprised that the party could be pulled off on such short notice and get everyone to show up. Mac sells himself short and doesn't always see his value. I stems from being abandoned but I also wonder if it contributes to him not letting people know when he's hurt.
I also loved how you had Jack worried for Mac. How at first he was angry about Mac hiding things, and then concerned and then when he told Mac it felt like he didn't trust him when he hides injuries. Oh that broke my heart a little bit.
Is it wrong that I'm totally down for Jack doing body checks on Mac after missions? I would read about that. I would read about the first time it happened, and those six months that it happened and what happens next

Omg! So great! I would love to see you do a story where jack kinda worries about Mac for the first time. Like maybe the first time jack realizes how skinny Mac is and jack kinda freaks thinking that Mac isn't taking care of himself... anyways love your stories! Can't wait to see whats coming!

Hi, I really like your stories and I think you have a very great talent. You always find good ideas in connection with the episodes, a new turn to scenes and you evolve the friendship between Jack and Mac. I would have a story request for you could you write a text in which Jack makes a nightmare about Mac who is hurting on mission or injured This keeps him from sleeping and he becomes impatient etc. Mac helps and reassures him. Thank you and I will continue to read xx

Cute

Liked it, but would have liked even more Mac whump!

THIS IS AMAZING, I love how it's written and really enjoy stories with a hurt Mac :) Very well done!

Aww...poor Mac, but hey, he's got the best friends in the whole wide world, so he's going to be okay! Thanks for writing and sharing!

What a sweet story. I love how Jack is so protective of Mac - especially when he gets hurt. And the idea that Mac had a panic attack before the party was perfect. (And seems so likely.)

Thanks for writing!

You always write these guys so true to form and always give us what we soooo need to see! I just love a worried Jack. Their conversation was perfect-I can so see Jack being upset that Mac is getting so good at hiding his injuries. but Jack's admission that he felt Mac didn't trust him broke my heart. So glad Mac was quick to affirm that he never doubts His best friend. Loved this! Thank you so much for sharing!

Aww that was great! I love nothing more than a hurt Mac and and a whole bunch of bromance. :)

I love this so much. All of your writing is absolutely perfect

ahhh. yes. i'm really growing to love this show (a large part of that is due to your fanfiction) and the relationship between Mac and Jack just pulls me in more every single day. i love this - i'm a sucker for h/c and hiding injuries and protective, hovering friends and this hit all of those, head on. ;D this is so GOOD. thank you for taking the time to write these; i love all your stories so much. x

Thank you so much, my dear. Another wonderful bedtime story. I want to know what some of the gifts were!