This story is absolutely amazing! I really like seeing people’s reactions to the Pevensies’ strange experiences, and seeing them try to adapt To normal life again is really interesting. Please update soon!

I love Richard Armitage :)

This is the most amazing fanfiction I have ever read please update!

I have read hundreds of fanfictions for so many different fandoms and this is the best fanfiction I have ever read. Thank you for writing this :)

This is really well-written. But, it's not very realistic. I mean, teenagers talking about wars that happened 16 years ago? That would've gotten them sent to the crazy house for sure. Especially considering the time period. And all that talk about witches and giants and magic? This is in the 1940's, people wouldn't have been as forgiving back then as they are now. Now, you might get strange looks, be singled out as the 'weird' one or the 'crazy' one. Then? Definitely an asylum.

Not surprising they would have PTSD, although a conversation like that in front of a teacher and classmates would probably get them both locked away.

I love these drabbles! They're all sooo lovely. Very light, plain, and simple but VERY lovely! It's absolutely nice to read on any day when you just want to read something or anything.

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I’m just loving your stories!

Just wanted to drop a line and say that I very much enjoyed this! Thanks!

I Love Richard as well, and this was a fascinating story with some interesting and unique ideas... I sort of wish more people would explore how Narnia would have affected the pevensies in day to day life once they had returned to England

I love it! Sigh. SO happy to see Edmond get some grownup help. It does make me wonder though. Why are the adults being so understanding. Because, if it were me, I'd be thinking two things right about now.

1) These kids are a few crackers short of a box. They're insane on some level, I mean. Asking for swords? Saying they're king? That's not normal.

2) They're child soldiers. And that's an even scarier prospect.

One, if not both, of these is bound to come up soon...right? It just kinda baffles me that it hasn't yet. Not that this means I don't love this story. I do! I just...like digging myself into a deeper hole, evidently. Sorry. I'm probably coming across as really critical. I really do love your story. *hides* Friend's still?

This is awesome! I can't wait to see what you do next :D
I'm not sure if you're strickly going with Peter & Edmund stuff here, but maybe something with the sisters too? Or when they're all at home for the holidays and something happens there? Idk these are just random suggestions you can throw out the window if you'd like. XD

Awesome chapter! I love what you did with the characters in both! Great job!

An idea is maybe how the brothers deal with the aftermath of this night? Like if the other students start shunning them or act odd around them. Just a thought.

Anyway, great job! I hope you keep writing.

Wow! This is...wow! What an amazing chapter. I wish it weren't over. Poor Peter. How scary for him, not to mention Roberts. Having your life threatened like that, and then hearing all those things, it'd shake even the staunchest of boys.

I love how you mentioned that Roberts was surprised the boys hugged. Very English. (Least, that's what I'm told)

Any chance we'll get more?