autschI'm a sucker for happy ever after's and so on. therefore is this story not so good for me. but it's well written and in and of itself a good one. bot nothing for me.

Much sadface.

I appreciate the motif of two out of three, and the way it recurs. Apart from one "n" for "in" I don't see any problems with the writing.

The story is rather too much tell and not enough show for me. I realize it's a short story, but there is a distance to it that prevents me from engaging with it emotionally. I also had to check who was talking a few times, as the tone and lines were quite similar for both women.

I did like the ending.

Interesting start. All the angst Ron went through while Kim was with Eric was for naught. Kim would be a high maintenance girlfriend (jealous, controlling, always has to be right). There's the old saying of, No matter how fine she is, some dude is tire of her ****. All Ron has to do is "step up" and Kim will make the relationship self destruct, because if it ain't Princess' way, there's the highway.

So, Shego, eh? Well, there's always room for another RonGo fic. I'm sure there will be speed bumps along the way (Kim, Shego, Kim, Kim's family, more Kim, etc.)

I hope to read further chapters.