ah shite... 0.0

Great chapter! She got captured by the kett. It must've been really bad for her. It must've been really painful for her too. I'm really looking forward to see what happens next.

I was just thinking about this story when my cell alerted me but boi was i not expecting this. I hooe she makes it out of this one, other than how shes surviving without her enviro suit

yooooo.
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UPDATE

Uhhhhh a cliffhanger! Why do you do this to me!?

This is really good!

First of all, I have to comment on your details. The amount of detail you put in your story is really good.

I really like the fact that you didn't rush to the point where Jaal and Iyali'Talaas met. And I love the relationship you have written between Iyali'Talaas and Syrus. The way you show bits and parts of their backstories is also really good.

And wow, the part where Syrus talks about how he met Iyali'Talaas, I did not expect that. It seems like they have been through a lot together.

Will definitely be looking forward to the next update! Especially after what has happened at the end of this chapter.

Fantastic :)

Tbh even I have a hard time writing or drawing fighting/violent scenes so it's okay. You'll get better the more you write em.

I hope she's okay though. Got a feeling that Syrus didn't make it though... ;n;

I hope she doesn't get skittish and leaves. Her staying and helping feels like good character development for her but I guess almost leaving and struggling not to leave would make a great plot twist

She sounds like me at a doctors appointment. Want to be out as quick as I went in.

Girls gonna get pretty sick if she keeps cracking open her helmet.

Seriously loving this story, always eager to see a new chapter from you and can't wait to see what you have in store for us next

Cute :3

I wonder how long it'll take til Syrus to start getting pretty jelly over Jaal

Awwww :3