Don't agree at all with having Sheele kill Misaki, 1 minute Sheele is happy to see her again and the next she's willing to kill her in a heartbeat because of some weak, half assed attempt to betray her? Sheele herself could have dealt with those guards without Natsu's help and probably talked some sense into her afterwards rather than murdering her like it's no big deal. It doesn't make a whole lot of sense for Misaki to betray Sheele like she's worthless trash only for Sheele to do the same exact thing by tossing her aside so casually after the guards were easily dispatched, whatever happened to beating some sense into someone? I also felt that Misaki could have reasoned her way out a lot better, saying "Are you really going to kill your friend?" after she just said "who would want to be friends with someone like you?" is seriously lame.

Next, why did it matter that Sheele had to kill her anyway instead of having Natsu do it? For closure or something? That scene would have been much more satisfying if you had Sheele just kicking her ass for betraying her while reminding Misaki that she saved her life when she was almost choked to death by her EX boyfriend.

Booo for adding gray

I'm loving the story, I really want to know who is going to attack Natsu first Leone (I think it will be her and I hope it is), Akame or the purple-haired girl? (I forgot her name) and please I ask you and I hope Esdeath and Najenda are in the harem for some reason I think Natsu and Najenda are very cute (maybe because she and Erza are similar and I love Natsu and Erza) and if more Fairy Tail characters besides Gray come to the history and Erza is among them please add her to the harem too (the only girls I ask Esdeath, Najenda and Erza in the harem please)

I am crazy for the sequel and to see when Esdeath will be introduced and fall in love (and enter the harem) with Natsu I hope that unlike Tastume, he would be very good if he managed to take her to their side (yeah a giant waste she dies because of the shit of the empire) do you intend to bring more characters from Fairy Tail (if yes and if it is Erza please put her in the harem)?
ps: i hope to see who will be the first girl to hook Natsu i hope it's Leone, but most importantly please add Najenda in the harem I once read a story where she got stuck in Fiore and knew Natsu and went to the guild with him and there they started to fall in love and in the end they got married after that story I started to love them together but unfortunately nobody does that I hope you do.

oh great you're back!

I want to see who will be the user of the teigu of Acnologuia and I hope that Natsu different from Tatsumi will be able to bring Esdeath to their side and respond to her feelings (I hated 1ue in the work she did not have the corresponding feelings for him and still dies in the end) and again put Najenda in the harem (and my only request that I do)

I hate Gray so it spoiled the story a little bit, it would be more interesting if it were Gajeel or Jellal.
Ps: Please add Najenda to the harem

I hope Najenda is in the harem.

that was cute

Let's get busy! Natsu's getting all types of busy considering he will get a harem but will you make all the girls die I wonder? Anyways good job and hope to see more.

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER IN THIS STORY

Update?

Yeah that fact is kinda obvious since his two friends mentioned nothing of him even if they left the village and got separated, they would have most usually explain that there would be a third member of the group or something.

This story is really good I love it but please update soon I’m dying to see what’s next

Nice! Keep it up!