Will there be more parts? Very interesting story, it's a pity to waste

This is such a fascinating story. I love the way you're written Alphard and Minerva and several of the other characters, it really shows their depths and makes them three dimensional. Hermione's antagonistic relationship with Electra is great and I'm really looking forward to seeing how she deals with Tom and if their relationship "gets better".

I can’t tell you how much I love this fic. It’s funny, original and your versions of Hermione and Tom are believeable and interesting. Your OC’s are fleshed out and give depth to the story. Overall: The story is very well written.

And I really wonder what Tom is up to, being «dull» and chatting about school all the time. Can’t wait to learn what he’s planning! I hope you’ll update at a faster pace, please?

Nice. I will keep an eye out for updates. This is a new spin on Tomione and I can't wait to see where it goes or who Electra really is. I would post a guess, but that wouldn't be nice to people who pop on too see if this is a good story.

Pls update

Great story so far. Hope to read the next chapter soon.

This is a great story! I like how you have fleshed out Alphard as a character. Even though he's a bit of an idiot. I'm curious to see how the "friendship" will develop between Tom and Hermione.

I hope you will update soon! I am very interested in Electra's story and I can't wait to see what will happen next between Hermione and Tom. :D

This is great! Thanks for writing! :D

Really good

I really like this story!
I'm hoping it's a slow burn with tom, hopefully she'll convince him not to become Voldemort!

Great story!

Your story is pretty good :)

Since it's one of Hermione's main goals to make sure Myrtle Warren doesn't die, why doesn't Hermione get some roosters, go down to the Chamber of Secrets, and have the roosters cry to kill the Basilisk? She knows how to use Parsletongue enough to get down there...Yeah, Tom would eventually still FIND the Chamber and probably gain the respect of more Slytherins because of that, but without Slytherin's monster alive, he wouldn't be able to use it to kill Muggleborns AND Tom wouldn't be able to set Hagrid up as the scapegoat. With the Basilisk dead, much of Tom's power would be gone before he ever even has it! And that will prevent the creation of his first Horcrux, which is one of Hermione and Electra's top priorities.

...And for that matter, maybe Hermione should take care of Aragog now, rather than later? She'd have to introduce herself to Hagrid first, but she could convince him that Aragog would be better off with his own kind back in the rainforests of Southeast Asia, thus preventing any colony of acromantulas from forming in the Forbidden Forest. She could befriend him and maybe introduce him to the herd of Thestrals in the forest as appeasement so Hagrid doesn't get upset about losing his "friend." And with Aragog gone, there's no reason for the Ministry to come and snap Hagrid's wand and expel him (without a trial/hearing). Plus, after a few days of dealing with Alphard's more manipulative brand of friendship, I think Hermione would DEFINITELY benefit from an unconditional friendship with Hagrid!

As for future planning of preventing Horcruxes, maybe Hermione could use the same trick she used to keep her parents safe? She erased their memories of her and implanted in their minds that their lifes' ambition was to move to Australia...maybe she could do the same for the Muggle Riddle family? I'm not saying that she should erase their memories and create new identities for them, but she could implant the idea in their minds that after all of the "unpleasantness" that Tom's birth father has gone through after Merope Gaunt essentially raped him, that it would be a good idea for them to sell all of their estates/assets and move to the United States for a new beginning? They seemed like the type of family who cares about what society says about them and I'm sure Tom Riddle Sr.'s time with Merope Gaunt didn't go unnoticed. With them in America and starting new lives being filthy rich, upper class aristocrats, surely they'd be safe? I doubt Tom Jr. would cross an ocean just to kill them. Didn't he only go there because he was already at the Gaunt shack getting Slytherin's ring?

And for THAT matter, is there anything Hermione and Electra can do about the Gaunts and Hepzibah Smith? Yeah, the Gaunts are complete racists, but even they don't deserve Tom Riddle's wrath. And if Electra decides to keep the ring, then that's at least one Deathly Hallow that won't be in either Voldemort's or Dumbledore's hands..and if Hermione and Electra can somehow make Hepzibah "lose" Hufflepuff's cup and Slytherin's locket and have that become public knowledge, then Tom Riddle would never go there and murder her...and her house elf Hokey won't be wrongly accused of murder. And if they really want to keep all of the Founder's objects away from Riddle, Electra and Hermione should go find Ravenclaw's Diadem in the forest in Albania and spirit it away.

Amazing story so far! You are a great writer. I can't wait to see what happens next. Alphard is such an interesting character. I think I like him, despite his obvious flaws. I wonder how he will react to Hermione's anger at what he did! Also, Electra is such a fascinating OC. She's very intriguing, and I love her attitude. Anyway, good luck with future chapters. Keep up the good work!