Reviews for Ben's new dna |
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Zeke17 chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 Wow it’s one of those ships “vomits” when will you people get it though your regarded skulls that this disgusting filthy abomination that you people call a ship is unatually disgusting and weird you need help |
Daniel6 chapter 2 . 12/17/2018 I came up with a similar idea several years ago. Never did anything with it, though. |
Story reader man chapter 2 . 2/15/2018 Defanetily will be happy when the next chapter comes out |
HeliX Sol chapter 1 . 9/25/2017 But Overflow is basically a knockoff Water Hazard, he even comes from the Andromeda Galaxy, which means he shouldn't have been in the Omnitrix to begin with since it's only supposed to have Milky Way Galaxy aliens. |
jasongd chapter 2 . 7/19/2017 Very Interesting story congrats I be waiting for next chapter Bwen Forever |
ANTI REAPER chapter 2 . 7/6/2017 I just read this story I'm a huge fan of the alien and Predator series and alien Covenant was just like the first one not an action movie but a suspense movie and I can't wait for the update |
Kennayil chapter 1 . 4/1/2017 You came up with a good way to avoid the incest issue. The whole reasoning behind the 'no 1st cousin relationship' issue is to REDUCE the chance of inbreeding. That being said, there are many countries out there where such relationships are allowed. However, your readers should keep in mind that Ben and Gwen are from the U.S. and would have been raised to avoid such a relationship. Technically, they are still cousins, but on the genetic level, they are strangers. This negates the incest portion, and now they must only contend with the societal ramifications. Nice start, I've seen a couple of x-overs but they usually make Ben OP or a complete dunce. Hope to see more good stuff. See you on the flip side. |