Holy Cow! That was so explicit! It's amazing how you did that!I want to continue reading this series!Thank you sooooo much!

This is really good but it hasn't been updated in a while though...really want to know what happens next :3

its good to see u again... Ai was so cute in this chapter... Great job portraying all the characters inner turmoil.. Hope u publish the next chapter soon...

Oh the feels ;-; I was biting my lip the feelings were so intense. Your pacing and descriptions are the best I wish I could be that good \•/

Sooooo good! I love the angst and the way the plot is moving along!

OMG! Finally ur back... now it actually makes sense why Haru choked.. But I think Rin was too harsh... Pl ease upload the next chapter...Really want to know what happens with Haru in the hospital...dont make us wait another 6 months... pretty please

Everyone was in great character! It would be cool if you could make another fanfic a multi chapter free iwatobi swim club one!

... WHAT HAPPENS NEXT... COME ONNNNNNNN! I GOTS TO KNOWS PPPPPLLLLLSSSSS!

wow... great writing. Everyone was so in Character... I have been longing for a Hurt-Haru fic for a long time...Please update soon... It will be awesome if you turn it to a multi-chapter!

Me too ! Actually I watched the anime a few months ago! What a surprise u

I want you to know that I love your writing and the way you lead your stories ! This one isn't an exception.

Well well... I hope to see you soon :D good luck !

Is it strange that literally, three weeks ago, I started reading the Free! - Iwatobi Swim Club light novel? I didn't plan it, I swear! XD Anyways, this was great, very real to the story and everyone was very much in character. I'm excited to continue reading!