Love your story! Love Bea! Need more Bea and Derek!

Forgiven

Oh god the feelssssssss im gonna dieeeeeeeeee

OH MY FYCKING GOD YOU'RE UPDATING THIS AGAIN! It's been soooo longggggh

BEAAAAAAA SHE’S BACK

I literally just started reading this book tonight and I am INVESTED. I love it!

Awesome story! I can't wait the next chapter!

I’m so happy I stumbled unto this story! It’s so original and yet so incredibly well written. I absolutely love it!

And Bea. Oh do I love her. And yes, she’s the typical sister of Stiles, only she isn’t typical at all and I absolutely love how original she is.

There is so much going on in this story, but it isn’t at all overwhelming and I’m just loving all of Bea’s interactions with everyone and how you are able to write her history into this story through flashbacks without taking away from the current story plot as well. And even though it’s original plot, it still takes place in the canon storyline and I’m so excited to see where you’ll take this story, with what you’ve already written and potentially further on into canon story as well!

Though I’m slightly disheartened to see how long it’s been since you’ve updated (though I’m such a hypocrite considering how long I haven’t updated my own stories) I’m hoping to see an update from you soon! All the best!

I am so glad I found your story. I spent the whole night reading it because I couldn't put it down. The dynamic between Bea and Derek when they were young is amazing and I could totally see it happening. I'm interested to see how the story develops now that Bea is aware of the new state of Beacon Hills. I definitely want to see how her relationship with Derek progresses, I'm secretly hoping they end up becoming as close as they were before. I love how you've inserted Bea into the narrative of Teen Wolf. You don't rely on the show to drive your story but you're able to incorporate it in a way that seems natural and not at all like a retelling. I wonder if at the end of this Bea will decide to stay in Beacon Hills or if she'll return to her old life. I suspect that she may want to stay. It looks like it's easy to get sucked into the supernatural world surrounding Beacon Hills. I love what you've done and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Bea. I'm also invested in figuring out what is happening to these kids!

Hello!
Okay, so... I should've found this story a lot earlier, because I've read your work before and it's awesome, but now I've binged the whole thing in a day and I'm obsessed. I really, really hope you haven't abandoned it because it's beautiful and that would be a major shame.
To start off with, your characterizations are kind of next level. I actually wanted to ask if there's any tips you can give along the lines of character creation, because you have a fantastic talent for making them really vivid. I love your tact with handling their flaws especially - you make them human, no judgement involved.
I usually also try to add a criticism, but really...? Man, I don't know. I love the plot, I love the tension of trying to figure out her connection to Riley Bridge (her mom?), the mystery of the suicides and what else she's hiding (theres clearly more), and the slow rebuilding of old bonds. You've done fantastic. I guess the only real complaint I can even think of is just that I feel like her boss stopped pestering her kind of suddenly, but that could all just be happening behind the scenes.
You even got me to ship Bea with Peter, which - holy crap, I never thought I'd ship him with ANYBODY, but that last chapter where she confronted him really made it solid for me. I mean, I was debating that or Derek/Bea, but it just seems like maybe she gets Peter like nobody has since Talia, and I feel like it's actually having a really subtle but strong effect on him? I don't know - I could be wrong, but I love it regardless.
And speaking of loving things regardless; while I really, really hope you'll be able to continue this fic at some point... I understand sometimes it takes a little time. So you do you and, if and when you decide to post again, your fans will be there. (:

Awesome!

This fic is amazing! I can't believe the lack of reviews! I love Bea's character, she's so freaking awesome! I can't decide if I like Peter/Bea interaction or Derek/Bea interaction better. lol. I can't wait for more! :-)

Yaya and my voice is heardddd. Cant wait for the nect chapter

Go Bea! Love her badass moment. Can't wait to see the fallout from her conversation with the boys and her getting the 411 on what went down. Will she find out Malia is Peter's daughter?

Fam please update soooooon. Im legit waiting impatiently for a new chapter