Your story is beautiful, I really enjoyed the Pacifica chapter that takes on the role of Gideon.

I dont know why but I ship yellow and bill

A nitpick but I would like it better if the town was called gravity rises

I like what you did with bill and yellow diamond having the same goals but swapped peronalities(yellow being as crazy and bill being stoic)

Well, that was an interesting read. While I saw the Mabel clones coming due to the whole idea behind this chapter, I did NOT see the Connie clones coming, but it makes PERFECT sense. Although now I wonder what that mission was... Oh well, I'll find up soon enough. As for the OC's, who are basically Candy and Grenda, I was not expecting that but in hindsight I probably should have seen it coming. And just how strong is Connie if her time-displaced clone could crush that hourglass with her hand? Ah well, I can't wait to see what else you have in store. And besides, even if the next chapter DOES take ages, at least you're faster than ME.

buen capitulo - good chapter

Very cute chapter! I'm glad to see this story's back, especially now that we're in its equivalent to arc 2! Once again you did a great job of taking the original UF Copies and Clones and giving it that unique GR/Momswap twist. All the characters were written excellently and seeing the Gems join Connie in that little jam session at the end was precious. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to your original take on Bottomless Pit! :D

good grief a male version of Candy and Grenda!

Nice! Great to see you work on this again! Copies and clones was always my favorite chapter of arc 2, and you've managed to make it even cuter, especially with the whole jealous Connie angle(don't think i didn't notice the reference from the latest stevenbomb.). And I really liked what you did with dipper and Steven here, nice to see them bond in less strenuous circumstances. Keep it up, fellow universe falls writer.

... Honestly, the hypnotist angle made this just so much, creepier than how it was in the show. I mean, in the show, Gideon used societal conventions to pressure Mabel into going on more dates with him. Here, Pacifica was basically drugging Dipper on top of that to get him to do what he wants. And honestly, her trying to make Steven, Mabel, and Connie kill each other was probably one of the most messed up things I've ever read in a fanfiction that wasn't a poorly written romance. Also, was Jasper speaking from her own experiences? Considering what the cryptograms for the last chapter said... Also, Mabel trying to crack the codes like a real GF fan! Granted, I never noticed the codes and so never got to decode them myself, but still, bravo there! I look forward to the slightly less morbid Copies and Clones. Well, less morbid in that the morbid parts are also kinda funny in the original episodes we're talking about here.

Okay, so, in my last review I was talking about Kingdom Hearts distracting me, and here you have a sword that's also a key. Oh the irony. Anyway, this was a great chapter and I look forward to more cryptograms. Kind of interesting how the more personal information of the Gems was put in cryptograms. I haven't decoded Rose's entry yet, but I plan to at a later point. Once I've done that, it'll be off to Chapter 8.

Well this was an interesting chapter. So, only Mabel is keeping her telekinesis. Interesting choice. As for the rest, Lapis flirting with Peridot is as amusing as ever, and I think it's interesting how you made Greg more organized than he is in canon, while still establishing that he's a bit of a hoarder. Although, what's this about Greg having seen another Red Eye in the past? That has, interesting implications. Regardless, I look forward to the other two chapters you posted while I was distracted by Kingdom Hearts. So, have a pleasant day.

Wow, wow that was honestly the best chapter I've read soo far. Its so great to see such a complete change in Pacifica's personality, from a spoiled, snobby, uptight rich Girl, to a obsessive, kinda immature and girly, psychopath, with by so far, is the greatest personality swap I've seen. Her interaction with dipper was honestly the best thing in here, and I hope to see more of it, especially when we get to the little dipper episode. Idea for that: What if when she shrinks them, she actually ends up carrying dipper everywhere she goes, kinda treating him like a toy, and even smothering him with tons of kisses, something that'll both scar and leave the boy in slight arousal.
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buen capitulo-good chapter

A good shot at an original chapter. One thing that I question is the use of the "mystery kids" nickname. They haven't really dealt with that many mysteries aside from the gobblewonker.