This is pretty good. I like this.

or better since he shouldn't know how hunter's training goes yet knows that they have to whatever, just don't get in the way of my training "

there are a few things you need to fix in this story like the fact that the text is centered so far the story is rocketing forward you have no buildup and the most you do have so far is the intro also your noctis personality is off cause usually he's sarcastic and fairly serious you have him pegged as the middle guy. remember noctis does complain so normally he'd say "do these guys have to come?"

No need to fix yourself on a pairing right away. Though I would say put things together and see how well things might fit before deciding on pairings.

Wow, what a bitch. Great chapter.

Whens the next chapter it's been nearly 5 months

Also, if you do pairings please do RubyxNoctis. Even if it's not an automatic relationship at first, like they do take interest in others at the start but slowly start falling for one another as the story goes

This story seems interesting, I just suggest one thing; please don't change to much of the RWBY plotline and makes it so a character from a different fiction out ranks everyone in crossovers. I've read to many stories where a author diverts from it and it's a bit disheartening to read...

Lancaster or Dragonslayer or neither?

Those bastard CRDL never learned. Cardin got a death wish when he called my fav character fat if it wasn't for Gladiolus he would be dead now. Great chapter though

Good so far. Please don't make Noctis x Ruby or do the guys x team RWBY because 3/4 of this crossover is already that. Try to come up with new and original pairings

I HAVE NO IDEA WTF HAPPENED?! Please help!

WALL OF TEXT

Ok so I am really liking what you have so far, I just have one little problem and I'm not sure if it's just me or ffn messed up your story when you uploaded it, but I see html coding ,so when there should be bold I'll see "/strong text /strong", could you perhaps fix this?