was this continued... on your other account?

holy cow this is what I wanted

Oh wow. That was really, really good! Actually, I think all of your stories are simply fantastic, you're a great writer. There were no errors, and that was very well written. It was short and sweet, yet not too short and not too sweet, with a touch of fiery romance that basically describes Natsu. Ah, just, absolutely wonderful! Keep up the excellent work!

This is a such a cute fic, I love it.

I will say this is cute. and all about just a kiss. most people in find don't understand how a kiss can alter the perception of not just the receiving party, but the one giving it. there are all types of kisses for all kinds of situations as well. it is like a hug, profound and sinplistic. but means so so much more.

...As if that ended with /just/ kissing x3333
Now i reaaaaaaaaally want to see what happens when they get to Gray's x3333

Aww it was cute how Gray grabbed his arm in cute af annoyance when Natsu started listing off his kisses :3

That was hot! Loved the emotions behind everything!

I love this.

Ahhhhh...I can't get enough of your stories. Seriously your stories give me life and makes a depressing day into a happy one in an instant. Sigh. It's so cool how you make so many different versions of Natsu and Gray and yet they're all still in character. 3

Fuck, that was hot. Damn, that was really fucking hot. And gotta love jealous Gray. Loved it.