I'm incredibly disappointed about the unrealistic reaction Andy is having after learning the truth about everything. Every single person she cares about aside from Jenna has been lying to her and purposefully keeping her in the dark, which put her life at serious risk. Elena decided she knew what was best for Andy and made important decisions about her life without considering how she felt at all. Elena had no right to keep things from her. It's absolutely disgusting, and Andy would feel beyond betrayed by her siblings and friends constantly lying to her. It makes no sense whatsoever that she wouldn't feel that way, to the point where I cannot even read further because it repulses me. Ignorance isn't safety. Having all the information is the only way to protect yourself against threats. Elena is selfish, and although she says she just wanted to protect her sister, she truly had no right to decide that for her. You should rewrite all of this. It would be the perfect thing to send Andy straight to Elijah if he approaches her with answers and comfort.

Also, the name Andy was a bad choice. Elena is such a beautiful and elegant name. Andy is literally the kid from Toy Story. How do you name one child Elena and the other Andy? It's so lame. You also don't describe her appearance at all. The only mention is that Elena and Andy look nothing alike, and that Andy's skin colour is lighter than Elena's. I can only hope Andy's beautiful like Elena, since it would be awful to be the twin sister of such a beauty with only average looks.

I forgot how much I missed this story hope you are doing good. :) If you are ever interested in continuing this story I will hopefully be here to see it. :) Stay safe and happy.

It's quarantine time and I'm literally more scared to never get to read the end of this amazing story than I am of getting sick! I was on a marathon, this fic is sooooo good, I really hope you'll come back to it! All the love xx.

I love this story so much! Andy is such a great character and her relationship with Klaus is entertaining and yet somehow stressful. They have such great banter and I really appreciate you taking your time before making their relationship more romantic. On the other hand though I’m so ready for Andy to get the epic love she deserves. After the way Tyler and Damon treated her it would be nice to see Klaus or Elijah step things up in the romance department. Of course Milena can only complicate things, but I’m excited that she popped up and can’t wait to see what you have planned next!

Omg you’re gonna leave it there?! She didn’t even see Elijah yet! Please update soon!

That was a good twist. The story got a bit drawn out at stages but the last 2 chapters helped get it back. Now for the fun part!

I love Klaus so much

I am loving this story. I know it is a rewrite and I really hope you continue with it, otherwise I may have to go and read the original. Only a couple of things that stick out to me. First, when Andy drinks Isobel's blood...Isobel had been getting vervain from Damon, so if Andy drinks her vervain tainted blood then Klaus wouldn't have been able to compel her that night. Second, the mountains in Tennessee are the Great Smokey Mountains or the Appalachian Mountains, not the Rockies. Other than that, no complaints. I have been entertained and thoroughly enjoyed this story and I really hope you come back soon and update.

Hope to read more soon.

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Love it, update soon :)

This story is absoultely AMAZING! I love it! Keep up such great work, I can't wait for the next chapter

You've done an awesome job with this story! I'm really enjoying Andy's interactions with both Elijah and Klaus. You've kept them both in character really well, showing both their more apathetic, sinister sides, but also their caring sides. You've done an especially good job with Klaus in that regard. You've made him relatable without forgetting that he's perpetually an awful person, and Andy's reactions to everything have been realistic, which I really enjoy and appreciate. I'm curious to see how Andy's and Klaus's interactions change after everything that went down in Mystic Falls. The temptation to go read the old version for spoilers is strong...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ok, Im not really liking this Andy at the moment...mainly cause she seems kinda..weak I guess. ONe of my favorite things about Andy in the other story is that even though she gets screwed over...alot...by everyone...she is still pretty strong. Maybe cause Elena just bugs me in this story and I want Andy to slap her or something.

As much as Im liking this story..or this version of the story anyways, I have to admit that I actually like the first one better. Mainly cause Elijah is my fav character by far and I loved the bond that Andy had with him and love when they finally get together. Are they still going to end up together like they did in the first one, cause honestly, he is way better for her than Klaus.

I’m totally rooting for Andrea/Klaus. I think they’d fit together marvelously!