Reviews for Total Exploded Pahkitew Island
Dogman3333333333 chapter 17 . 6/18/2018
I would have like Amy to go first then sugar then Scarlett then Max then Topher cause they were the annoying one's of the season
Lord of the Sloths chapter 17 . 4/16/2018
Just finished reading this and I definitely liked it. Maybe even just a little more than your Revenge of the Island story with Danni. But both were still good. I will definitely be reading more of Julie in your Ridonculous Race story. I also want to look through some of your older stories now. Anyway, this story gets a thumbs up from me.
Lord of the Sloths chapter 6 . 4/13/2018
Hey there, I know this was published a year ago, but I've finally gotten around to reading this story. And I gotta say I'm really liking it so far. Julie's a good character and the changes you've made are pretty good. Another thing I like is the length of the chapters. I'd like to make my stories closer to this length. Anyway, I'm going to read the rest of this story now.
Pokemon FTW chapter 17 . 7/29/2017
I'm back!
Also, great job with the final few chapters. I'm going to miss this fanfic.
SilentSinger948 chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
This was a great story.
SuperKitty4789 chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
I loved this story! I didn't dislike any parts of this story Awesome job Jazz!
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
The change you made for TDPI is nice. Though if you ever do another OC in Total drama story, I'm really wondering if you're actually gonna make your OC an actual threat in the game. to be honest, aside from Julie, the rest of your OCs are way beyond my expectations. I know the characters in TD, especially the big names, are hard to beat, but come on. There has to be a scenario where your OC triumphs over the rest, not like curbstomp triumph, but something like a hard-earned triumph. Just saying.
Gage the Hedgehog chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
What a nice ending to this story.
Nicky Haugh chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
You did perfect my friend!

The entire storyline was masterfully accomplished in such fictitious methods, and I thought that Julie made a good protagonist villain herself.

You should feel proud of yourself mate; speak soon.
Bloodylilcorpse chapter 17 . 7/27/2017
Very nice ending, I loved it. And, I can safely say that like you I would have changed the falling out with Sky and Dave too- the note that they ended on was a pretty sour one. I'm not sure what I would have changed it if I had tinkered with it, haven't put much thought into it, but I rather enjoyed and love what you did to it.

Julie definitely came through and brought about some good changes into the show, she certainly helped Beardo come out of his shell, stopped Sugar's bullying of Ella, and the same with the twins. She was a good influence on a lot of the characters even when she did 'not so good things' too like spying on their confessionals and abandoning Ella some time back in a challenge to save her own hide. I liked her character a lot, she wasn't overpowering and nor was she a "Mary Sue" either. She served her purpose well among the cast.

Again, enjoyed the story, and looking forward to reading your next ones! :D
LaViolaViolaRosa chapter 17 . 7/27/2017
Loved it! Amazing ending!
SilentSinger948 chapter 16 . 7/26/2017
First time I've ever read a story where Sky won. Great chapter.
SuperKitty4789 chapter 16 . 7/25/2017
Great chapter Jazz! Can't wait for more
Gage the Hedgehog chapter 16 . 7/25/2017
What a chapter. I bet the winner is the same.
Bloodylilcorpse chapter 16 . 7/25/2017
At least this time around Sky is able to properly explain to Dave her situation back at home with her soon-be ex, Keith? Congratz, on her win! lol However, I was still secretly rooting for Shawn! XD

Perhaps now Sky and Julie can properly make up too since their last encounter on the show- things seemed a bit tense between the two. Good chapter, Jazz! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what will go down next...

'Going to swing on over to "A Ghost of A Friendship" now, I'm not really sure how I missed the newest chapters for it the other day, but things do happen! Anyways, happy writing to you! ;)
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