Can't believe you wrote something this good as a complete one-off then never posted again

This was diaberltes inducing, I needed to brish m6 teeth after all that sweetness and then the punchline
I'm saving this for a palate cleanser to re-read after reading something upsetting

the last part made me laugh and please write more

this was really well done and you should consider making another one

Nice story. I laughed so hart at the end. Hope you still do your best at whatever ff you are writing at.

I loved this!

This story had excellent amounts of both fluff and angst. I can easily see this being a story or some more chapters being made. Regardless, this was a delight to read and I hope to see more fanfictions from you in the future.

Brilliant. That last bit. Perfect. lol.

Usually I try to critique honestly and even a bit harshly to help writer's improve. With this story, I say fuck that, for I can summarize everything you need to know from me in 3 simple words. I NEED MORE.
-Syntheticate

Lol at the last line.

Also I think that the scar makes Weiss look badass.

This was really good. Other than the occasional grammatical error (such as "everyone one..."), I really it enjoyed this cringe fest because it's the good, sappy type of cringe that you get when two people that are obviously in love just won't tell each other that they're in love. Great job!

Wow lol this story was really good. Had the perfect balance of being serious and yet fluffy at the same time. Amazing job!

Aww. That made me really happy! Thank you so much for the smile!

OMG, this is perfect! Great balance of serious and humor.
I've never really considered Weiss to be gay, just Rubysexual. Lol.
Speaking of whom, Ruby's last line was fantastic. Haha.
Are you going to do a follow up with the other pair?

Absolutely wonderful. Great job man. Also, that little ending absolutely killed me

Loved it. I could easily see both characters shine through. It is also refreshing to see a not-naive Ruby.