| Reviews for Past, present and Flames |
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   KITSUNE TAKAHARI chapter 4 . 1/17 Me encanta esta historia y tengo una gran fasinación por ella |
| Tsuki Banritt chapter 4 . 1/10 thank for the very beautifull story ! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/15/2019 This story is amazing. No rush but please update when you can. |
| Keimichi chapter 4 . 11/22/2019 Very interesting story! Sometimes the syntax makes a bit hard to read, especially in chapter 3, since there’s a lot of missing punctuations and a lot of phrases are framed together without any comas to organize them. It breaks immersion when it becomes too hard to understand without slowing down my reading speed. The story is very interesting though, I can’t wait to see how it pays out. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/28/2019 Imma be honest, I never watched the anime so I have no idea if all this Flame and Sky stuff was in it. When I tried watching it I stopped after the first episode cause it was so bad. |
| Misaki Vanderwood chapter 4 . 10/6/2019 *inhale* I LUV DIS FANFIC BOIIIIII! |
| Stachelbeere chapter 4 . 9/22/2019 Love love love it! |
| H3llion chapter 4 . 9/19/2019 Interesting story! I'm looking forward to people finding out about Anshar~ |
| Shiho-Akemi chapter 4 . 9/9/2019 I love it I love it, plz don't leave it that long |
| olivia.rodriguez.927 chapter 4 . 9/7/2019 Love it~ |
| AnimeFreak71777 chapter 4 . 9/6/2019 :D |
| The Whimsical Ermine chapter 2 . 6/8/2019 Is that foreshadowing? That's a nasty tease |
| Deacog chapter 3 . 3/5/2019 My previously comment was meant for chapter 3, but it still applies for all of it. |
| Deacog chapter 1 . 3/5/2019 Okay, first thing first, I have some tips. For one thing, I'm not sure why you put a dash before dialogue. You don't need to. Another thing is that you tend to have run on sentences and are missing commas in places that really need them. Now that that's out of the way, I really like the concept of this story and am looking forward to reading more. |
| Sakihinata chapter 3 . 1/4/2019 I absolutely love this chapter ;) |
