I really liked it! In fact loved it!

Loved it thank you

I really liked how you captured Harry's personality perfectly! well done

great job

The titel of the fic was what caught my attention and I was not disappointed. You did a really good job at writing Harry and I liked your style of writing. You tell the reader things but at the same time you don't tell the reader too much and you allow the reader to think for themselves. I hope that made sense and if not then that's a good thing. I like writing where you can read between the lines.

I think you should look once more at the document though. It could be just my computer changing things but there appears to be a repetition... for me the story appears twice. It ends in the middle of the page with Harry proposing and then it starts over again with the exact same story. But it could just be my computer in which case I'm sorry.

Anyway, I really liked it! Nicely done! :)