Reviews for Betrayal's Sting
writerforeverr chapter 9 . 5/10/2019
Well didn’t see that one coming
Guest chapter 16 . 9/12/2018
Can I just say... holy shit
sheepish123 chapter 16 . 1/28/2018
Wow, that was extremely intense. I could barely breathe throughout this entire chapter. I'm glad they got to Fin in time and it ended on somewhat of a hopeful note, but I can't imagine him having to move forward with that on his conscience and somehow going about daily life again when things will never be the same. Amanda is so incredibly strong for choosing to talk him down after what he did to her; even if he was sorry and never meant for it to happen, it still did happen and I don't know if I would have the same strength in her situation. Kudos to you for tackling such a hard and unique subject matter, as I've never seen this type of storyline before in the SVU fandom. You did a wonderful job and I'm very glad you saw this story through to the end. You are a very talented writer and one of my favorite things about your work is how different it is from everyone else's. I never feel like I'm reading the same recycled plotlines. I'm really looking forward to your Rolivia chapter! :)
IamAwriterYAY chapter 16 . 1/28/2018
The name of the chapter is fight, right? Well, I'm about to fight you. How could you do this to poor poor Fin. What did he ever do to you, hmm?
Hela chapter 16 . 1/28/2018
I'm glad to read your last two chapters and thank you for not to have abandoned your story and have it finished. I was scared that Fin is going away but I'm relieved that he was saved by those they love him and that Amanda forgave him.
This story was very intense because it involved Fin (and we love Fin!) in a horrible but not voluntary act. Congratulations for your excellent work and your high quality writing. Looking forward to read your next story.
wordless.whispers chapter 15 . 1/26/2018
Love the new chapter. I really hope they get to Fin in time!
Nanda chapter 15 . 1/26/2018
Wow

Just founf your story. Read it in all today! Nice work,
sheepish123 chapter 15 . 1/24/2018
I'm so glad you haven't given up on this story! I need to know how it ends! I'm sorry you lost your confidence with writing, but I'm happy to see you back. This was such an emotional chapter, with Fin making those plans and the conversation between Olivia and Amanda in the kitchen. I don't blame Amanda for not wanting the details of her rape to be revealed; I would feel the same way. I hope you're able to update again soon; looking forward to reading more!
IamAwriterYAY chapter 15 . 1/22/2018
I hate you right now. Poor Finn, also glad you are back. I guess you can say that I have mixed emotions about you right now. Poor Amanda. Why do you do this to me.
Hela chapter 14 . 10/15/2017
I'm glad you're back on this very good story. Fin's distress and remorse for what he did to Amanda is heartbreaking. Very good work, looking forward to read the chapter.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/13/2017
I really just don't get it. Why would Fin do such a thing? Your writing is great, but I don't see any reason why he'd hurt Amanda.
I'm sure he regrets it and feels bad, but what happened in his head to decide not to listen to her when she begged him to stop? Really, it makes no sense for me. He's Fin! Would you give us an explanation?
sheepish123 chapter 14 . 10/12/2017
Yes, I am definitely still reading! And wow, was that ever a powerful and emotional chapter! I had a feeling Fin was going to end up doing something like this (or at least trying). I am so glad you were able to get back into this story because I am really anxious to see how it ends. Hoping for another update soon!
starie78 chapter 14 . 10/12/2017
Still reading this great story. I love how you have protrayed the team's dynanics.
k.monks1967 chapter 14 . 10/12/2017
Glad I stuck around, I did think it was going to be that somebody had set Fin up and put something in his drink. To know he did this breaks my heart. But I’ve come this far I’ll stay till the end x
Hope life gets better
sheepish123 chapter 13 . 7/31/2017
I really love how close Olivia and Amanda have gotten throughout this whole story - their developing friendship is so nice to see, and it's great that Liv has been so comforting and caring and concerned about Amanda. It's nice that she has so much support from both her boss and Carisi while all of this is going on, especially because of how conflicted she is feeling towards Fin. I really can't wait to see what happens next and I'm looking forward to the next update. :)
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