Dang...there's only two chapters left...I really can't believe it...I love this story, but more than that, I love your writing! You are talented

I hope everyone's okay...Love the story btw

I'm just going to say that the more I read, the more I love this story.

Umm... the NOLA precinct? Wasn't this story set in Chicago up until now?

I loved this chapter. I especially love how even though the whole chapter is in Hayley's POV, you can still just feel Elijah's pain when Hayley tells him they can't keep doing this in his apartment. it's so obvious that it was not just sex for him, and he's already starting to feel something real for her. So beautiful and heartbreaking. and that party... I just want to stab Gerard Sr. What an ass.

I absolutely love this fanfic! Poor Elijah, he never seems to be able to catch a break, there's always something new for him...

WOW! This chapter was just amazing! So happy you updated!
I somehow didn’t think what the first part foreshadowed, though I did think Elijah found a pregnancy test, but I was surprised that Hayley actually called him to show him the test! So that was interesting!
Gods, poor Elijah! He doesn’t get a moment’s reprieve!
Hmm, why do I think that the forwarded memos actually came from the defense team? Maybe not directly from Hayley, but she was uncovering a lot last chapter, so who knows since she interviewed those same women who wrote the memos. Or, it might not be Hayley given that she wouldn’t want to give Elijah the evidence that would exonerate Marcel, but I think it might still be M&G related.
Poor Kol & Elijah, clearly both feel so hopeless about Davina, I hope that at one point Elijah will finally do what is right. Also, there are clear sparks between Kol & Davina & I hope Kolvina happens by the end of this fic!
Poor Elijah, he can’t even go to lunch with Hayley because Katherine decided to vanish off the face of the Earth. God, Elijah’s love for his child is palpable, and it’s almost painful! I really wanna know more about the whole Katherine-Elijah-Nadia stuff & I also want him and Hayley to talk about that. I feel like they could talk more about the things that are kind of an issue between them.
Elijah’s custody battle is even more interesting, though not quite so hilarious as Klaroline. Gods, I hate Katherine! The scene with her coming to get Nadia was just so heartbreaking! My heart just broke for Elijah!
Oh, boy that last part! I kind of didn’t expect Hayley to call him to show him the pregnancy tests, but holy hell! Is this gonna end in joy or in tears? I cannot wait for the next chapter! This chapter was just so good & so worth the wait! Loved it ️️️

This was amazing. Loved the Haylijah flirting. And seriously wondering if this custody battle will even see the inside of a courtroom before these two idiots decide to just raise Fiona together.

Oh, I can't wait to see where this goes. And never mind HaylijahI'm all in for the Marcel/Hayley friendship alone. They are do CUTE.

Bravo! a baby haylijah !

I love your story, plis keeps updating.

You should publish it in archive of our own too.

And the only plot thickens... Damn, this is getting soo good! I love it! It’s nice seeing Hayley and Elijah one the same side (at least in one case) and I loved seeing lawyer Hayley! Poor Elijah, though, having to deal with the Katherine shit.
Oh, boy, Aurora knows a few things. A few things that are important. And, she signed an NDA. And Rebekah said no to both of her questions, and part of me wants to believe her. So, whodunit? Can’t wait for more!
Honestly, this is soo good ️️️
Happy Holidays!

I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story :)

Can you add scenes with JUST Klaus and Fiona?

I think that as far as the klarolineFiona situation goes you should be a little more sensible to Klaus’ case. I understand when you are parcial to a certain character and I understand that the Klaroline formula is “always have Klaus in the wrong,” but in this case what Caroline did was incredibly cruel and irresponsible, and I think that should be addressed. Have more people be in Klaus’s side and sympathize with him, and have more people make Caroline realize that what she did was wrong, regardless of where their relationship was at the time. Also she did kind of lead him on and made him think they would be together as soon as they went back to reality, and although I understand Caroline’s reasoning in THAT, it still doesn’t make it right for her to lead him on.

I know this is primarily a haylijah story but I really like the Caroline bit and for the most part I LOVE the way you portray them, I just think these are important things to address.

Once again thank you for sharing your writing!

I think it was Katherine! I think she is trying to drive a wedge between him and Hayley. I know Marcel didn’t kill his dad but I can’t figure out who did? Maybe the woman he was sleeping with? I love when you update this story it’s very intriguing. Update again soon!