It's fine, thank you so much. I really liked it you got time all down

Great chapter, feel sorry for Don though. Roxy

You do not need to apologise, I understand alot of things come first. That great to hear looking forward to hear them all.

Wow Raph you really are hothead and you have got alot making up to do. If Splinter find out about what you been doing he going to be ten time worse then Leo. I did not think Leo was being selfish to me he was being typical big brother.

Again you do not need to apologise and honestly I really understand

really good chapter and looking forward see what happens in part two. How did Leo find out or will their dad find out too

some reason I missed this one and do like it poor Raph I hate being sick too

I don't know if something is wrong with fanfic on my end, but I just see a chapter you've already published once. That's not to say it's a bad chapter, I really enjoyed it, but I've already read it once. Again, it's not bad, but it's nothing new. If anything, you could've just sent me a PM and told me to read the first chapter again.

I thought you already did this one earlier?

Thank you for doing it maybe not what had pictures but i did really enjoyed it. i really did enjoy poor Miwa though dont think she knows what she got her self into. Leo n Donnie no problem but Raph and Mikey on the other hand lol

This is a really good fanfic! Nice to see these brothers in another way, especially as humans and how they interact with each other. I really love to read about Raph and Donnie's twin love and their relationship.
If I may give a small suggestion, we have seen a lot of Raph comforting and helping Donnie, but it would be nice to see it the other way around and have Donnie comfort or help Raph with something. That or I would love to see Raph defend Donnie against bullies, like something to do with Hun or something.

Oh, you did great! A very well done job. It was as if every single of the four happenings where made especially for each brother accordingly. Not that they werent, but, what i mean is that they conveyed each brothers feelings and character, they were perfect, unique even. Although i especially liked mikeys and donnies stories. They were so emotional and, well, creative. Still, i believe that all of them were outstanding, good work

wow all brotherly love in all corners and Donnie you are not unworthy x love Mikey and Raph so get Raph onside again its cake good to know. it was good chapter

love it, did like the Raph and Donnie centre chapters but nice to see the Mikey and Leo one.

Oh, i loved it! Thank you! It was great. So nice! You did very good, i really liked it, it was incredible. Thanks!

Oh, you did perfectly! I love this series. And your writing style is so good. I wanted to sk if you could make a chapter on leo and mikey. Maybe something like, leo saving mikey from bullies or mikey having an emotional breakdown and leo helps him understand how much he is love or something like that. I love those two. Of course i love the other two too. They are all awesome in their own unique way. And i really like how you portray their personalities. It is amazing! And all of your ideas are so creative. I just love them it cant be helped.

Yeah its so good, i can see Donnie doing that thinking about others.