Dear Raven, good luck in your immediate future. I am one of those people who are most definitely waiting for your return. Very good story.

Are you going to finish this one as it still has potential and leaving it on a cliffy only will spoil a very good read. If you are carrying this on I will look forward to the next instalment and link but if not thanks for the read.

I just found this story this weekend and read it all - it has gotten better. As you said you are working to improve your grammar - and that will help. Don’t pause it for 3 years though-good luck with school. Let us know when you are back to writing.

I love the story please update

Really good chapter. It’s good that Christian has apologized to pheobe and that he now tries to make it up to her. He tries to protect her know and starts listen to her.
Also an important fact is that pheobe told him what was going on so he can try to change it. She doesn’t have to suffer in silence anymore. Really excited what will happen next. Luke is as cute as always (;

Great chapter! It’s good to have a little more of an idea about why Aaron is such an ass. Luke is sooo cute… kind of makes me wish I had a little brother growing up :)

Ok. Can't wait to find out more about this Aaron and his family. Where is June?

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This is my first fan fiction series when we get to see the kids grow up at it but I'm glad that you took the extreme to go through it to give us an inside look at how Christian Grey will raise his children and go through his daughters dating and see if they have a hard time trying to get married so for that I think you and you brought up a very important subject on school bullying not too many people were right that for I've had some tears with this series because it reminded me of when I used to get bullied but unlike Phoebe I never had the heart to tell my parents I suffer in silence

Great chapter

Wow. Christian did ready did lost it. I'm glad he quickly he realized his actions. I wonder if Teddy has seen the article and where is her friend? Was she really her friend?

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Love it

Are you going to add more chapters?

There isn't a proper ending

it bad

Great chapter can't wait for more