Reviews for Maelstrom in the Asterisk War! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() debes escribrir quiero saber que va pasar cuando empiece el torneo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually liked this, plot seems interesting and writing is good, kind of wish you would focus on a few stories instead of constantly dropping them and going on to new ones though. Anyway I think the whole War Academy City Asterisk anime has a lot of potential as far as fanfiction goes and I liked seeing that someone has written a story for this crossover genre. |
![]() ![]() Really hope you do continue this. The groundwork laid was fantastic for more chapters. Hope everything is alright with ya. Btw ignore those that want to you to stop, if they have time to do it then they can do soemthing more productive with there lives. |
![]() ![]() Now I really want to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I expected more but it's as boring as I thought it would be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY IS SO GOOOOD |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked the chapter. This is the first Asterisk x Naruto crossover that i find readible. I'm liking the plot thus far and would really like to read any updates you release for this fic. Keep up the good work, lookoing forword to another chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far so good, just need some work on your choice of words when doing the narration. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like this concept and the story is great as a whole but I think some polishing up the idea is something to consider, I personally love this idea and was thinking about doing something similar in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank for actually making an attempt with asterisk. No one uses naruto and asterisk crossovers, and this chapter is very good. Hope to see more of this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was interested in a fiction with War-ACA. But then I saw your profile with 32 stories and not one having more than 5 chapters... Hell more than half only have the intro. So yeah... No idea if this is good or bad, havent started reading knowing there will be ni more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start. Keep it up. :) |