Sorry it took me so long, but I had a long shift at work today and I also managed to finish writing my next story "Donkey Kong and Ty: Attack of the Franken Frills." But anyway, great ending to this amazing story. I actually found the part where you have to keep dodging Bowser's attacks and not fight back was a little annoying and unfair, because I really wanted to heal during some parts. And the ending was a bit sad, but at least the younger heroes know they have a bright future ahead of them. I am looking forward to your "Bowser's Inside Story remake", but I'm mostly looking forward to your "Dream Team remake" so we can compare notes. Also, since I just gotten my next story finished early, I might decide to post it early as well, but I also want to get some work done on the Zelda and Poke'mon crossover soon as well. Looking forward to you next work and hopefully I won't be too busy that day. Tiger out! ;)

I did catch some of those quotes from Sonic Generations, most notably Sonic's line. I caught a glimpse of your updated bio and I was interested on how the Star Children are involved. As much as I'm disappointed that the Sonic characters aren't getting involved, I'm still excited since it's my favorite of the series.

I noticed two of the foreshadowing events you mentioned. The one in Ch. 8 was a given, and the vacation sounds very familiar to me (most likely referencing Dream Team where they vacation at Pi'illo Island). I'm probably missing something obvious for the third one, but it's not ringing any bells as I read it.

Anyways, this was another well written crossover from the Mario & Luigi games. Good luck writing your next story! I'll be looking forward to it!

-TGN

Just letting you know, a swear world like "shit" is a "T" rated thing, not a "K" rated. Anyway, I used the Mix Flower a lot during the fight against the Elder Princess Shroob. One time, I ran out before the battle finished. And ever since than, I always saved up my beans for Fawful's store underneath Peach's Castle and bought that badge that gives you unlimited attack items. If only they noticed the babies taking the Shroob Mushroom. Looking forward to the last chapter!

The Shroob Castle was very hard for me to figure out how to progress. I still have to look up what to do to get to certain areas. But that UFO challenge I have to try several times to get through. Yeah, I died on that UFO challenge several times. And I remember when I first played this game, I accidently had Stuffwell bring me back to the same part three times when I tried to save after finding Princess Peach in that cage. I'm guessing you're almost to the end since we're this far into Partners in Time. Can't wait for the next chapter and have a Happy Mother's Day!

Two of your OC's meeting, reminds me of you Super Paper Mario remake. I remember I felt sad when Toadbert and Kylie were turned into Shroobs Mushrooms, and I felt sad for Amy here too. Although, I was expecting Amy to turn into a pink one. This just keeps making me hate the Shroobs even more, but I think that's the point like how everyone is going to keep hating Tabuu more in my stories. And you're right, that phrase I had Evil Meta Knight say in my "Missing Meta Knight" story does sound similar to the Shroobs.

Sorry it took so long, but I had the neighbors over yesterday and their four year son broke my Super Smash Brothers disk. The neighbors bought a new one for me off of Amazon, but I was busy yesterday to read your chapters. But now that I'm back, I found the Aurora Block challenge a bit unfair since it torments Luigi a bit. But the music is still cool. On to the next chapter.

First time playing through this part of the game, I loathed the Star Gate for being so rude to Luigi. It initially rejects him with some secrets that even I don't know about, then after all that hard work to unlock the Aurora Block, it still berates him when Luigi was thinking of his friends rather than himself (and that's unselfish!). I know it was a test, but I hated that gate. I'm so glad all of Luigi's friends backed him up and ignored his various flaws. It just goes to show what true best friends they are. And that part where the block expanded to the size of Luigi's heart touched me in an emotional, yet hilarious way. I bet this chapter was a bit tough to write. In the end, it was awesome. You did a great job!

-TGN

I love your stories!

That Star Realm reminded me so much of the Star Road in Mario Kart and Star Haven in Paper Mario. I did enjoy the music though. And we know why Baby Luigi was crying ;) , but there was on trial I thought was annoying in the Star Shrine.

Well, it's good to see the notification on the email is working again. I'll bet you're happy. Anyway, I figured that Shroob was Kylie when she started taking photos when I first played. And now Amy has her memories back.

The good news is that the notifications are popping up again so I'm glad to see that the story's update without having to check every several hours in case the next chapter did appear. I just started replaying PiT because of your story.

I know I'm not the one who controls the story, but as a recommendation, I would like to see more dialogue from Tails and Luigi. Just from my perspective, Sonic is the most chatty out of all the heroes. There's nothing wrong with that since he talks a lot normally whereas Mario and Luigi technically don't talk in the real game. But I prefer if the dialogue is spread out evenly amongst the team if they each have the same amount of screen time. That's just me, but you don't have to listen to my request. It's your story after all. Nonetheless, it's still going on pretty well and you're doing a great job!

-TGN

Back from dinner. Anyway, did you know that the ice flowers are critical against Ms. Thwomp? They are. And it was also funny to see Bowser and Bowser talking to each other. And before I realized Eggman wasn't in this story, I was sort of expecting young Eggman too. Oh well. Can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully, I'll get the notification next time.

I don't know why I didn't get any notification for your chapter, but I'm reading this one now. When I first played, I was not expecting adult Bowser so soon. Nor him smashing a hole in the catwalk in the castle. And it was funny to see how integrating with Professor in the past effected Professor right away in the present. I'll check out your next chapter after dinner. My wife is calling me right now.

Luigi crying after making the babies cry was funny, but Luigi fainting was even funnier! If only they knew the truth behind that mushroom on the princess' face ;)

The Shrooboid Brat was one of my favorite bosses in the game! He was a lot of fun. And I think he is the only thing that prevented me from completely hating the desert level. But what I remember what Luigi did in those tunnels made me laugh!