I love the crossover. I know this story’s like old; but to really make people squeal you can be more descriptive/show not tell, making the story longer and therefore letting readers enjoy the cuteness.

This is pretty cute, but I feel it could be much longer

7/10

This is cute, but lacking in any flow to the story. It has great potential, though, and I hope you go back to this.

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