Thankyou for the grammar lesson,
Aku harap selanjutnya grimmjow yang akan mengajar

This is one interesting story! That last bit was funny XD Loved Nnoitra's battle scenes as well since I've been struggling with POV structures. So that was helpful.

(btw, a Bleach fic by sjcrown3 called 'Through the Ages' used 'piqued' correctly)

Heyyy I was looking forward to Grimmy's class! Please get him to teach, I'll give him my full attention if you know what I mean

thank you for the grammar lesson, sensei

Loved Nnoitra's side notes about Ulquiorra and women fighting and "uh . . . because I wanted it this way". It was really entertaining and such a fun read! :)

That one was actually really helpful. I am already trying to write stories with only one (two max) point of view in them, because I feel I should use other ways (dialogs...) to express what a character think. And I have a hard time doing so, because I'm shit with dialogs. So, thank you, it encourages me to continue.

Ah! I love this! It's so cute and well-written. I love reading stories where the Espada are being something other than really cool bastards. This was very informative and entertaining, and I can't wait to read more!

I feel like Szayel would be one of my favorite teacher, just because I would enjoy his reactions when confronted with the best (worst) cases of ignorance. I really appreciate your fic, because I feel you keep, somewhat, the characters IC, and because, let's be honest, everyone needs a little reminder on how to write properly. So, even if it is only a beginning, it is very promising.

Noitara!

That's interesting!

interessant.

I'm not one for many words, so I'll leave you with this: lel.

Please update soon! Grimmjow and Ulquiorra are awesome. Now, I feel like fan fiction.