this story- it's- it's just GENIUS. ahh my god that was so good what the heckkkjjjxnx

I read the "I'm not a goat hunter" for probably 5-6 times and still laughed hard. Hahaha! Oh, my. The plot of the story was unique and amazingly awkward. I felt myself pausing every paragraph and mentally screaming while reading this. I was like, "Ahhhhhh! What is going on here?! All these misunderstandings is driving me nuts." I honestly did not expect Naru confessing directly at the restaurant. I think my heart just stopped beating and I even refrained myself from slamming my head on the wall beside me. I'm just out of words. I was also shocked with the part where Yasu and Naru almost kissed on top of Mai. Poor Mai. I hope this is not the last chapter of the story! I'm really excited to know how their relationship would progress, if Mai can really take this kind of relationship and how the entire SPR team would react if they find out. I wonder how Lin would react. Hahaha. Oh, Lin! (If they ever find out that is). :)

Bwahahahahaha! "Oh no, Naru will step on me". why is Mai so freaking adorable?! And oh my God that NaSu with the arm draping and teasing... im shipping them more and more. And Naru's "I'm stripping" oh my God nosebleed. I love how Mai keeps saying "oh no" when it's Naru, she totally doesn't want to admit she feels something for him, but Maiiiiiii you dooo. And then her enthusiastic "Oh yes"es for Yasu. lmao this girl is such a dork I love her. Then queue the biggest misunderstanding of all. Lmao I loved how Naru immediately went into protection mode when he thought Yasu was making Mai uncomfortable. And I died at how Yasu's armpits stink! That is so mortifying, but I guess his bigger problem is his forwardness. I just loved this entire story and I'm super glad you extended it to 4 chapters. it's been such a blast to read! May there be more Naru/Mai/Yasu OT3s to come!

This story was the cutest thing, I honestly wish you would continue it sometime in the future!:) it's the story Iwait for the most, please don't abandon it completely :) Also, great work on the writing itself!

Oh heck, this was great! I would favourite this story again if it wasn't already one of my favourites XD I absolutely loved the strange but adorable relationship between these three and hope you will not abandon the story completely :) Even if it's oneshots I'm up for it! Also, best of luck with your other works in progress!

Oh man oh man this was TOO MUCH! I wrote my thoughts down while I was reading so here’s my commentary:

“Oh no, Naru will step on me.” *bursts out laughing*

Omg poor Mai they’re practically making out on top of her this is too much omg

…Omg Mai you’re such a voyeur XDD

LOL Naru not reading the signs

“I’m stripping.” OMG I AM DEAD.

LOL poor Yasuhara isn’t getting kisses from anybody. And I love how both Mai and Naru shame each other for it. XD

OMG I’M DYING AT THIS MISUNDERSTANDING

Wowwww this is so awkward

Oooooh Naru HAS been there before~~

“Naru showed a small smile.” This is so sweet omg?

I love Naru as this calming, balancing presence between the other two omggg

Ahhhhh Naru’s confession…Mai…this is so sad ;_;

“This sounds too much like a ‘to be continued!’ at the end of an episode” LOL Yasuhara to the rescue

Awww all these confessions

“Well, I don’t mind being your banana.” YASUHARA STOP

OHOHOHO the boys sharing the shower, eh? :)

Awwww Mai sleeping all over them

“Goodbye.” LOL YASUHARA

“Get him, Mai.” LMAO

Ohhhh man I hope you do write more, this OT3 is TOO GOOD. ;_; Thank you for writing! I had a blast. :D

Just YES! I LOVE this ot3! This whole story was one hell of a ride and I loved every bit of it! My heart almost can't take the awkwardness and soft love that was all throughout this whole story! I'm completely on board with one shots with these dorks!

Poor Mai... I feel like she's just barely holding it together. I mean, I can't blame her though! Naru and Yasuhara are just too much. TOO MUCH. And Naru's concern for her at the beginning of this chapter is just too sweet. Wondering about her daily life and how she manages is just really touching, despite all the distractions of the rest of this chapter it stuck with me til the end. I can't wait to see what part 4 brings! The tension you're building up is just superb!

This awkward aura between Naru and Mai, oh my goodness. And I just love the way Mai immediately thinks of them as rivals (omg Naru is so direct - so perfect) but he contradicts her. I like the way this is going! Of course Mai and Naru have both fallen for Yasuhara *v*

This is so cute and funny! It's so enjoyable to read this. I love reading Mai, Naru and Yasuhara together, they make such a great trio. And I laughed out loud at "I'm not a goat hunter"... loolll :) :D XD

I didnt know if i should snicker, giggle, groan, or feel awkward as i read this...So I just did all of them. I felt for Mai, she was so ruffled and confused and had no handle on anything whatsoever, and Naru and Yasu are not making this any better. lol, I tried so hard not to bust a gut today while reading this.

And now here Naru and Yasu are. Trying to find the best way to explain to Mai they both pretty much want her in on whatever sexy shenanigans they are getting into.

THE SEXUAL TENSION IS SO GREAT I DON'T KNOW HOW TO HANDLE IT!

I WOULD BE PERFECTLY CONTENT IF THIS JUMPED TO AN M RATING LOL!

XD Hahaha! This is so beautiful, I love it! Thank you so much for this fic Fly!

Fly, I like your style. It’s simple and not so bogged down with descriptions and yet you manage to get your point across and then some. Actually, I think it only adds to Noll’s point of view, as he is a person of few words. And he actually looked it up, oh I love him so much. How his mind just immediately jumps to Mai, it’s precious. And a hopefully a hint a developing relationship…? :) And then you switch to Yasu’s and Mai’s point of view and Yasu is surely thinking only dirty thoughts. But Mai’s over here like having a panic attack. You’re very true to Noll’s cannon personality, it definitely makes the awkwardness of the situation more enjoyable. And hilarious. You’re description of Mai completely flustered is so cute, really brings out her personality.
Naru! Be nice to Mai, she’s giving you a freakin massage! Oh, but this makes it so much better. I can’t believe I waited so long to read this, it’s pure gold. Mai’s jealousy and Yasu’s sneaky sneaky tactic. I can’t wait to see where this goes. I feel like this was the origin of YasuNe fics because Yasu is such a player. And Naru isn’t having any of it.
Oh my God, I love your rendition of Naru. He’s so innocent and lovely and misunderstands everything. Yes, I can’t wait for more.
Sorry for my ranting review. On to the next chapter!
ELV

Man, I knew Mai would be nervous, but Yasuhara being so nervous too was really cute, and Naru being so straight to the point saves them from further awkwardness. I loved that dynamic between them. And once they actually got down to doing the massages, everything was simply GOLD. From Naru and Mai holding each other for 'safety precautions,' to Mai having to sit and watch the steamy NaruYasu massage (her reactions made me CACKLE), and just simply seeing Naru hang out with two people his age outside of work tickles me. (Naru smirked. "Jealous?") - This KILLED me.

And that last scene between Naru and Yasuhara was so CUTE oh my god. I have no words. You have totally sold me on this OT3 and I think this is well on its way to becoming one of my favorite Ghost Hunt fanfics. Everything is just so PRICELESS. I can't wait for the next part!

I hope Naru and Mai make up after what happen.