HOLY CRAP, I LOVED THIS.

Oh, as an add on to my other review, I think the flashback with young Sans and Papyrus in the Core was really well done! Sans' desperation to keep his brother safe at all costs and his fear when he thought he had no way out was just so sympathizable! Gaster's attempts to save his kids and decision to do that in the one way he could was so powerful and I could just feel the emotion there. Then his trying to stay strong despite how much pain he was in, and finally how slightly out of it he was once he was free because it just hurt so much was so... I don't even have a good word to describe it, but I reread that part at least 3 times because it was really well done and emotion evoking.
I also think your version of how Gaster's hands were damaged is super interesting, and I definitely haven't seen any other stories with anything real similar to that. The idea of him almost losing his livelihood, his job, and his ability to do most stuff, and knowing he might lose that all, for his kids to be safe is just really awesome.
As I said in the other review, this is awesome, you're awesome, and I'm going to find more of your stories!

I don't have time right now to write anything real long, so I'll be brief.
I love this story and the perspective you took on Gaster and his situation. The guilt he felt when he came to was just so authentic and real feeling, as well as both his and Sans' hope and hesitation that things might be okay. You're really an awesome writer, and I plan to look into what else you've written. I didn't check how old this story is, so I don't know if you'll ever see this, but ah well.
Regardless, you're amazing, and I wish you the best of luck in future writing and life!

This is one of my favorite Undertale fanfics! You did such an amazing job on this one, I hope you plan on adding on to this story with a prequel or something sometime in the future. :)

Omg amazing

Haha this was great to read, it was so hard to keep my laughter to myself so my mum wouldnt think I was weird

I know the discription has a Gaster refrance in there

This was very fun to read! Frisk just launching themselves into the void is a mental image I think I will carry with me

this is literally one of the best things i've ever read on this site. great job, dude.

This was amazing! You kept the story moving at a decent pace, but nothing felt rushed, and the ending made me so happy. Thank you for the awesome read!

I'm so glad I found your fic, it was really entertaining! The plotline was interesting and we'll-developped, the pace was just right. I liked your writing style and your choice of words too, and the way you were able to switch from one POV to another. Truly a fic well-made. Thank you for sharing your work with us, I hope to read more from you in the future!

Teach me your writing ways... xD damn your an amazing writer I really liked this.

This fanfic is amazing. This is probably my favorite gaster fic. Amazing job!

That was certainly very interestingt to read.
A lot of questions are left unanswered and some things felt very louse, but the scenes in the void - ironically enough - felt the most tangible and did a great job at keeping the reader in suspense. From a naratative and writing quality point of view however I think the best part of this story was the second half of Sans' flashback from when he was chasing after Papyrus. From the moment they fell in and you begann describing what was happening untill the end of that scene I was able to picture everything clearly and could hear the sounds in my mind.
I enjoyed the idea of Frisk still fighting with the temptation and I enjoyed them trying to save Flowey if they could not save Asriel.
And the dialouge line of "I'm probably not what you wanted or deserve." in itself is very powerfull, compliments for that too.
Overall I would say this was a good story. Not outstaning perhaps, a little more polish would be needed for that, but definately good. I am glad that I had the chance to read it and I want to thank you for sharing it with your readers. )

The best part about this story is the jokes. And the sass. I mean, sure, there's the amazing plot, the fantastic character development, realistic situations and responses, spectacular ideas, and well-written storylines that intersect perfectly...but the best part is the sass.