Reviews for Doomsday Mafia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow that was totally fabulous! You really can weave a great tale. Thank you for sharing your words - I loved reading them :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great twist. I didn’t see it until she said she was sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This wad a great story. I would love to read how vampy Bella and Edward re-establish the world together. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() women! sheessh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did not know this fic existed. Really. I thought I was familiar with most of your work & have read most of it. Clearly, I was wrong. You are such a gifted writer & have such original ideas. This fic shows that well. I'm glad I stumbled upon it...you mentioned it today on facebook & I thought, "Huh, where did this come from? 2017...really?" I enjoyed it very much. It's truly something different...short but creates a whole alternate world for Edward & Bella & the gang. Keep writing! ;) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really good |
![]() ![]() Bella tries to kill Edward but then freaks out because she did? That just so fucking flippant. I didn't like Alice spilling the beans and honestly it just seemed so unneeded. Shes such a worthless character. And having her human with gifts is just...stupid. It was a lot more believable in twilight because the "gift" made her crazy. |
![]() ![]() I love it! and as Bella being Boss of the Doomsday Mafia right on! :~) I hope there is more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don’t stop writing this story. I already love it. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() Love it! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very interesting. I liked it! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awe. I really line this!' R |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is crazy good. It's a nice change from the rut I've fallen into reading. |