FAILED as a Naruto crossover. You could change Naruto out for 75% of any anime guy and proof almost the same story. That kills it as a Naruto crossover. Good luck.

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Okay...Ive read this fic through once and honestly really struggled with it...

Your pace literally feels like you are running breakneck speed through things like "Here's this episode, done now! Sex despite no build up! Here's another episode done in a paragraph! Here is an episode finished before it started cause Naruto did something zany~! Here is four episodes jam packed into one chapter cause Naruto ends things instantly!"

It is so jarring that it gives me a headache and makes me really annoyed. Things are just all over the place and dizzying :/

Loved it, amazing story, looking forward to the next chapter!

Nice chapter

Blaze1992 I don't know what I liked reading better the story or you're comments

I need vodka stat to make sense of this.

Glorious! Keep it up!

That had better not been Hinata.

And there went my happy thoughts, they were killed so quickly.

I am not drunk enough for this.

That was kinda weird.

Nice Chapter!

- Naruto pulling an Eustace Bagge? Nice reference.
- Oh, so Warp also appeared? I always wondered why was Raven isolated when I saw that episode.
- So Donna is new fiancee now? Gotta say, I don't blame Naruto for running away though. No offense.
- So Terra is Naruto's apprentice? Good, that saves many problems. And she even survives robbing villains. That's funny.
- Terra learned under Toph? Talk about a nice teacher.
- Are Pierce and Agent Kay original characters? Just wanting to know.
- Ravager's got a thing for Raven, or just her legs? And what does BB's opinion about it?
- Yep, that Gordon guy got what he deserved. J.J. Jameson-like people tend to get annoying. Didn't expect that Alexis Rhodes helped with that problem.
- That obese woman got killed by remnants of Soto's ship? I wonder if that's going to bring problems later on.