Reviews for Coming Home
Guest chapter 7 . 4/7
Wonder what happens next?
Guest chapter 7 . 4/7
Red Eyes Black Dragon
Guest chapter 7 . 3/15
Will Lynn Wheeler be able to visit Jordan or what?
Guest chapter 7 . 3/2
Thank you for this chapter.
Autobot00001 chapter 7 . 3/2
Happy to help!
KaibaGirl17 chapter 7 . 3/2
You go, Serenity! And Tristan too, I guess lol.
Jordan needed that slap of reality a long time ago.
And those poor idiots are playing with fire (literally in a sense!) and they have no idea. Guess no one ever told them 'beware the nice ones'.
All in all, awesome update, can't wait to see the next one.
Boris Yeltsin chapter 7 . 3/2
I love it. Poor kids, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29
Sometimes, it's better if adults divorce. Other times, it's worse if adults divorce.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/1/2019
Thanks for this other chapter past three months.
Autobot00001 chapter 6 . 1/24/2019
Awesome!
Boris Yeltsin chapter 6 . 1/23/2019
Awesome you were able to update this. Try to update other stories when you can, as well.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/3/2018
It's been last year.
Lil.Hottie13 chapter 5 . 10/2/2018
Wow. I'm really loving this story so far. Poor Joey. I can't believe that his stupid father had to put him in a coma and then lie to the officers, saying how he didn't do anything. I just wish that Stacey was in this.

I would love to see how she would react when she hears the news of her boyfriend being in the hospital on life support and could possibly die. and as for Lynn's engagement to her new guy, I thought that was sweet as well as Tristan's confession to liking Serenity. and as for the wedding, I really hope that Joey would ask Stacey to be his date so that way, once she catches that bouquet, she and Joey would be the next ones to get married. Even though he would have to ask for her father's permission to marry her.

Once again, beautiful story and hope that it will continue. :)
renz5070 chapter 1 . 6/2/2018
Hey White pedal. I really love your story, The little Merman and the great new look you have gifted the story with. And I love how the sea queen is so heart broken, that she is willing to kill humans and punish her own people, because of her sadness.

I can see, that you notest my review. But i could not read it. So I would be so happy if you would send it again.

And last... I have an offer... I would like to maybe pay you for making more chapters for the story The Little Merman... I simpely love it.. such a sad story... Please :D

Hope to hear from you. Please...? Good week to you.
renz5070 chapter 5 . 6/2/2018
PLEASE I LOVE YOUR GENDERBEND VERTION OF THE LITTLE MERMAID
IT IS EVEN BETTER THEN THE MOVIE !

I love your genderbend skills, and I wondered if you could possibly countinue this story of the little merman?

Where the queen Trittania could
turns the female vertion of Eric into a mermaid so that she can live as her own adopted daughter and wife of her son, (genderbend Ariel)

Sorry if that sounds silly. Hug

But really think it could look amazing :) PLEASE MAKE MORE I LOVE IT SO MUCH ! PLEASE
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