Reviews for The Long Game
ReaderFreak5000 chapter 39 . 10/2/2019
Nyeh, I have caught up. Now I must wait for the next chapter. Phooey. Oh well. Ch37 was really good and the part where Jun was watching Gai go upstairs was made even better by the song I was listening to. It was "Animal I Have Become" by Three Days Grace, just as I was reading about how he could see what Hayami meant it was playing this part: "Somebody help me through this nightmare, I can't control myself. Somebody wake me from this nightmare," which with how he views Gai's relationship with Hayami made it all the funnier for me. Maybe it is tje fact that I read that chapter around 3:30AM? Eh, whatever, still funny. The last few chapters were great and very well written, like the rest of course. Anyhoo, I am gonna try and go back to sleep now. Darn cats woke me up around 2:00AM and finally are being quiet enough for me to sleep. Oh well read a great story and shall wait for the next chapter as patiently as possible. Goodnight(or Good morning which ever is appropriate...or Good Afternoon...)
chronicxxinsanity chapter 1 . 1/26/2019
I love this so far! Your character and descriptions of her are perfect
akagami hime chan chapter 33 . 5/13/2018
This story is so cute...I love seeing Hayami and Gai together
cathyscloud9 chapter 39 . 3/13/2018
Awwww love it! So cute
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 3/10/2018
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2018
Ahhh! You don't know how happy I am to have stumbled upon a Gai/OC fanfic! I find that there are far too few of them and I'm so glad to have found yours! I can't wait to read more and see how Hayami and Gai's relationship plays out-something tells me it'll be interesting ;)
cathyscloud9 chapter 38 . 2/25/2018
Love the story. Update soon
Afaaf chapter 38 . 2/20/2018
The way you have described morning Gai, i had a little flutter in my heart as well! I am so happy that you stated that you will finish this story. I look forward to the updates.
Afaaf chapter 36 . 2/7/2018
When i was reading this story i felt like i had read it before. I realized that i read maybe the first few chapters last year when it was being written! I had forgotten all about it. I am so happy to stumble upon this story again and finished reading it in one go last night. Its refreshing to see a love interest, one as well written as Hayami for Gai. Gai really deserves more love. The subject of slave trade made me really uncomfortable but i understand that it was necessary for the story. Love the Neji and Tenten interactions. And Lee. Oh hes just too youthful. This one is going to my faves and hope you will update soon.
FaeGhostReader chapter 10 . 2/3/2018
*facepalm*
Angelcorus chapter 36 . 1/31/2018
Omg!
Sunstar Writer chapter 36 . 1/31/2018
Pfft, they are sickening together... It's adorable and I love it.
SesshyxKagomeLover chapter 35 . 1/16/2018
It was awesome!
SesshyxKagomeLover chapter 35 . 1/16/2018
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE! 3
Mikomi121 chapter 34 . 1/8/2018
Ooo! Really looking forward to the winner festival! Perhaps Neji and Tenten will go together after a little more subtle flirting? Hahaha! Also! Good for Hayami standing up for herself against her sensei! That took guts!
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