More chapters please

is is 2 days before?

Hey this is a amazing story and I hope you come back an continue this at some point. The way you put each chapter was so good i want to see more from this

Nah nah y-ya can’t do is like that ya just can’t ok? Pleeeeeeeaase continue it I’m dyin here mate

This is a great story! I see a lot of potential in this! I see you haven't updated in a while. Hey if you are losing hope in this I could write it for you. Like I take this and you have one less story to write and a lot of stress lifted off of your shoulders. Just PM me if yes or no.

Btw the name for the game Kirito plays to get the 302,000 credits in the cannon is called Unstoppable

He doesn't owe her shit. She was the one that slapped him and then punched him. If anything, she is the one that owes him. But, I guess that answers my earlier question on whether or not she was going to continue being abusive.

...story was good until she got abusive. Is he just going to be a doormat? Is she going to just keep hitting him for no reason?

Is it me or is this chapter in a different language the others are in English but chapter 23 tries to translate and I'm only able too reed half other it.

I like the idea, but so far... I'm just bored. You make too many asumptions on the reader's part. Just because you know what you mean, doesn't mean we know what you mean. You also need to use more concise language when describing what's happening

Ermegherd-
Welp, shit hit the fan! :)

This is going to be a wild ride I can feel it.

Amazing! You've got me wondering what happens after the BoB... what will Kazuto / Kirito do, I wonder?

Hey, it's awesome that you updated. Great chapter! And thank you for using quotation marks! It's even better now. Keep up the great work!

I'm enjoying the story, but can you use quotation marks instead of apostrophes when doing dialogue? i.e. "Wow," he said. Instead of: 'Wow,' he said. It's more grammatically correct, and I have a habit of missing things in apostrophes. Anyways, keep up the great work!