Reviews for A Year's Vacation
Guest chapter 5 . 5/12
Please write more
MythGirl Writes chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
Please tell me you're going to be posting more of this! I love this story so much, you're writing is great!
The Fanfic Genius chapter 5 . 6/20/2017
Really hope you aren't dead XD!
Nexxus176 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
So...Still MIA? 0-0
DookSmash chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
I do hope you're still working on this :D
DookSmash chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
I really like it! I can't wait for the next chapters!
TheShapeH31 chapter 5 . 5/8/2017
The XY Gang's reunion! Didn't expect Bonnie to use a Pachirisu but then again I remember that this is Bonnie we're talking about, I wouldn't put it past her to use a Pokémon like that. Didn't expect Ash and Serena to have a battle, much less a battle that ends in a stalemate. Sophia and Sarah duke it out and I was honestly rooting for Sarah to win. Ash and Gary decide to accompany Serena and her sisters throughout Kalos on another journey, let's see where this goes!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/5/2017
my looks like things here just keeps getting more interesting in this amourshipping chapter, great job on the gym battle scene dude and as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who suppory amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.
Nexxus176 chapter 5 . 5/5/2017
Why was I not aware of this being a thing 0-0
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
ooh he's thinking and feeling about serena, looks like things here are really getting very spicy in this amourshipping chapter, great job dude. i hope we all get to see serena and ash get married together in the future as husband and wife in the pokemon series and beyond. we all will remain amourshippers and we all will keep on supporting amourshipping for all time. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.
Gast chapter 5 . 5/2/2017
wow, you got a nice thing going there! I really like it. The dialogues are not as... stoic as in many other stories, and your setting is not just your everyday's betrayal yada-yada. Keep up the good work, I'll keep reading
Amourshipper35 chapter 5 . 5/2/2017
Nice chapter I liked seeing the battles and I liked seeing th xy gang together again
TheShapeH31 chapter 4 . 5/1/2017
I binged read all 4 chapters over the weekend and I'm really liking it. Ash misses his friends in Kalos and took a vacation to see them (as well as to see Serena again) and Gary's along for the ride to see some Kalos Pokémon. I kind of half expected Bonnie to be the Lumiose City Gym Leader, can't wait to see what other Pokémon she has aside from Dedenne. We don't really see much for the parents of Ash's companions and meeting Serena's father is nice and is heartwarming to see that they don't have a strained relationship and she gave him a chance and is getting to know her two sisters (Whom I loved by the way). Sophia's sassiness and teasing her sister Sarah for her crush on Alain and Serena for her crush on Ash (which I don't know the status of their relationship, are they dating now or working towards that?). Sarah's a lot like how Serena was towards the beginning of XY being the shy, introverted girl. I like that their Eevee breeders, that sounds interesting. Can't wait to keep reading!
Amourshipper35 chapter 4 . 4/29/2017
Good chapter I liked seeing ash and serana meet up again and kiss wow and I liked seeing Sarah and Boone start to have a battle
Amourshipper35 chapter 3 . 4/29/2017
Good chapter I liked seeing Bonnie and clemont again and I gald ash and serana are going to see each other again
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