I really loved this fic. It always warms my heart whenever the tough and rouge-ish Uncle Qrow lets his soft side show for his nieces, whether in the show or in the fandom. :-) I especially loved the part where Ruby said that he was sounding like Tai, and Qrow was all disgusted. "Oh, no! Don't say that!" Hahaha! X3
In terms of grammar, the only mistake I could find was one part before they both go to bed again where the person speaking changes but a new paragraph isn't made, but other than that, you were golden.
This was a real joy to read. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the great work!
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This is beautiful work! I love it! The way that you wrote it is absolutely amazing! I really hope that you will make a second chapter!

A great little oneshot. I love Ruby & Qrow bonding as well. I'm not necerilly convinced that the Qrow is Ruby's father theory is right or is going to happen on canon but I am a big supporter of it. I think it would be a cool twist and explain some things. I am sort of sad that a lot of the fandom will jump down your throat if you even so much as mention it. Anyway, great job! If you decide to post of more of this I'd be happy.

Omg! That was so sweet! I love Ruby and Qrow bonding. This was very well done. You did great with their interactions and thoughts. I loved reading this.

Beautiful work I love it keep up and I like papa qrow to hope I'll write more and ignore the papa qrow haters like come on it's fanfiction for a reason right but for future reference if you do write a papa qrow fanfic leave a warning for less flames

Hello, i really loved this story and the bond beetweem Ruby and Qrow, who is my favourite character. I also support thath theory, let's say i'm the vessil of Hummingbird in the italian fandom, but sadly i know it won't be canon , given whath monty and the other writers said. See you later.